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Didn't plan to do this but everyone was just so nice,
Here are seven more lines:
There’s beauty in that shadowed, shaded trail
Where sharpened sight cannot make all things clear
Missing notes don’t make the music fail
(Have you heard a distant bell or mournful dove?)
That said, the symphony of all you are—
The thundering of your heart and surging of the blood within your veins
Engulfs me like a flood of joy and hope when I think of all the beauty that remains.
Frozen Dreams (7 more lines) PG
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Re: Frozen Dreams (7 more lines)
Lovely!
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Thank you, Alle.
Couldn't leave Mick (or whoever) in that nostalgic, sad place.
Couldn't leave Mick (or whoever) in that nostalgic, sad place.
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What a wonderful description of Beth!the symphony of all you are
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Thank you, MLC
Yes, to Mick she's a symphony he can dance to.
Yes, to Mick she's a symphony he can dance to.
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Oh this is gorgeous! I really love how you write!
And I love it ends on a hopeful note, too...
And I love it ends on a hopeful note, too...
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Thank you so much for the kind words!! In the first seven lines, there was a lot of sadness at what had been lost. This ends on a happier, hopeful note
Jenna
Thank you so much for the kind words!! In the first seven lines, there was a lot of sadness at what had been lost. This ends on a happier, hopeful note
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Lovely, lovely poem, Jenna
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Thank you, Karen!!
Your kind words mean a lot!
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Your kind words mean a lot!
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