Frozen Dreams - PG
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Frozen Dreams - PG
Don't own Moonlight. Certainly don't want to enfringe on copyrights
My dreams aren’t tethered when, in icy sleep
I walk again the paths of long ago,
The scents of life—of flowers, grass, moist earth, and heat
Are found again with senses I thought long forgot.
They seem so muted now, indistinct and imprecise.
That logic says I shouldn’t yearn for their return
And yet, I think I’ll mourn their loss as long as life is long and sunlight burns...
My dreams aren’t tethered when, in icy sleep
I walk again the paths of long ago,
The scents of life—of flowers, grass, moist earth, and heat
Are found again with senses I thought long forgot.
They seem so muted now, indistinct and imprecise.
That logic says I shouldn’t yearn for their return
And yet, I think I’ll mourn their loss as long as life is long and sunlight burns...
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This is lovely, Jenna, just lovely
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This is wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing!
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What a gorgeous poem. I love the imagery!
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Thank you for the kind words!
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Thank you for the kind words!
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Thank you, Karen!!
I wanted to capture too much, I think and only succeeded in about half, but this was a fun exercise!
I wanted to capture too much, I think and only succeeded in about half, but this was a fun exercise!
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Thank you for reading and leaving the lovely comment!!
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Kind words refresh the soul--thank you so much! It seems they are getting rarer and rarer in the world today,
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This is nice, Jen. Poetic and evocative.
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Thank you! I hadn't written anything in ages and had forgotten how much fun it is.
When i remembered I went back and wrote another seven lines
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So sad and lovely! Love the idea of Mick's vampire dreams being of all these human things, which are so faded now. Beautiful.