Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)
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Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)
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Rating: PG-13 for sensuality
Author's Note: Okay folks. Remember: no real skills here. Not a writer. Just love the love.
~~~September 2011 update~~~
***Special thanks to allegrita for searching for this and for her fantastic leadership on this board For maggatha-a little story for banner trade, not a bad deal.***
Originally posted Dec 1, 2008.
Reality outweighs fantasy
How many times have I fantasized about this moment? I have lost count. Frankly, I have lost the will to count; focusing on the here and now seems to be all that my brain, heart and body can handle.
When he entered the room, hell, when he entered my life, everything seemed to spin out of control. My thoughts were scrambled, my heart bursting out of my chest. You would think after so many nights, and yes, days, of dreaming about this man, that I would have some kind of inner control over my emotions. You would be wrong.
Looking at his face. My God, that face. The eyes that seem to hold more than what human eyes hold. The color that changes according to mood, the fact that I cannot breathe while looking at him looking at me. The fact that he knows all this, you would think I would care, but wrapped in his embrace, that is the furthest from my mind.
Don't even get me started on those lips. Soft and full and completely covering mine. Pretending in the dark of night that his lips were on mine has nothing on the real thing. And let's not forget the tongue. Jesus, his tongue. How it curls, and probes and touches, he must have more muscles in that one piece of his anatomy than anyone has a right to have. And this is just the neck up. I will never survive this. Please don't let me embarass myself by collapsing before we even make it to the bed.
He's pulling back now, that damn crooked grin and those deep eyes with those luscious lashes. Focus, I must focus. Focus on the lips trailing down my jaw to my throat, that tongue swirling in the hollow of my throat. The open mouth kisses to my collarbone and beyond. God. I need to breathe, just breathe. Last night when I dreamt this, I was able to breathe.
Hands interlocked in his hair. Thick, wavy, glorious hair. His tongue continues to perform circus tricks on my clavicle. My heart is completely betraying the supposed calm exterior I am pretending to possess. My hands begin to move without thought, his shirt pushed off of his chest. Good Lord, the chest. The slight smattering of hair, not enough to be furry, just enough to run my fingers through. Enough that now, without my shirt and bra, to tickle my breasts so that I feel that I could pass out from the sheer pleasure of it.
His mouth continues the loop across my upper body. Oh God. The tongue swirling, licking, rasping. The lips sucking and kissing. His teeth biting and teasing. Are those his fangs? Oh yes, the fangs have come out to play. Suddenly, this is real. Fantasizing about this moment is nothing compared to the reality of it.
He's picking me up, carrying me to the bed. My mind has now completely separated from my body as he takes off the rest of my clothes. I should be embarassed, worried that I won't measure up to his magnificence, but the way he is gazing at me now, I have never felt more worshipped, loved, desired.
He is naked. How did he get naked? Where was I when I missed that momentous occasion? Okay, so he is more perfect than I imagined. Broad and strong and muscular and oh God, that's his beautiful tongue playing tricks on me again. I am muddled. Incoherent.
Shaking, moaning: is that him or me? Do I care? He is over me, around me. In me. I am surrounded by him. This is real. This is happening. This is more than any fantasy I could have ever dreamed up. His movements are fluid and controlled. Mine are not. I am lost in a haze of sensation. Crying out; panting, begging. I forget my name, where I am. All that matters is us, in this moment.
After, kissing me, he whispers in that husky voice that I love: "I have imagined this so many times."
Reality far outweighs fantasy.
Rating: PG-13 for sensuality
Author's Note: Okay folks. Remember: no real skills here. Not a writer. Just love the love.
~~~September 2011 update~~~
***Special thanks to allegrita for searching for this and for her fantastic leadership on this board For maggatha-a little story for banner trade, not a bad deal.***
Originally posted Dec 1, 2008.
Reality outweighs fantasy
How many times have I fantasized about this moment? I have lost count. Frankly, I have lost the will to count; focusing on the here and now seems to be all that my brain, heart and body can handle.
When he entered the room, hell, when he entered my life, everything seemed to spin out of control. My thoughts were scrambled, my heart bursting out of my chest. You would think after so many nights, and yes, days, of dreaming about this man, that I would have some kind of inner control over my emotions. You would be wrong.
Looking at his face. My God, that face. The eyes that seem to hold more than what human eyes hold. The color that changes according to mood, the fact that I cannot breathe while looking at him looking at me. The fact that he knows all this, you would think I would care, but wrapped in his embrace, that is the furthest from my mind.
Don't even get me started on those lips. Soft and full and completely covering mine. Pretending in the dark of night that his lips were on mine has nothing on the real thing. And let's not forget the tongue. Jesus, his tongue. How it curls, and probes and touches, he must have more muscles in that one piece of his anatomy than anyone has a right to have. And this is just the neck up. I will never survive this. Please don't let me embarass myself by collapsing before we even make it to the bed.
He's pulling back now, that damn crooked grin and those deep eyes with those luscious lashes. Focus, I must focus. Focus on the lips trailing down my jaw to my throat, that tongue swirling in the hollow of my throat. The open mouth kisses to my collarbone and beyond. God. I need to breathe, just breathe. Last night when I dreamt this, I was able to breathe.
Hands interlocked in his hair. Thick, wavy, glorious hair. His tongue continues to perform circus tricks on my clavicle. My heart is completely betraying the supposed calm exterior I am pretending to possess. My hands begin to move without thought, his shirt pushed off of his chest. Good Lord, the chest. The slight smattering of hair, not enough to be furry, just enough to run my fingers through. Enough that now, without my shirt and bra, to tickle my breasts so that I feel that I could pass out from the sheer pleasure of it.
His mouth continues the loop across my upper body. Oh God. The tongue swirling, licking, rasping. The lips sucking and kissing. His teeth biting and teasing. Are those his fangs? Oh yes, the fangs have come out to play. Suddenly, this is real. Fantasizing about this moment is nothing compared to the reality of it.
He's picking me up, carrying me to the bed. My mind has now completely separated from my body as he takes off the rest of my clothes. I should be embarassed, worried that I won't measure up to his magnificence, but the way he is gazing at me now, I have never felt more worshipped, loved, desired.
He is naked. How did he get naked? Where was I when I missed that momentous occasion? Okay, so he is more perfect than I imagined. Broad and strong and muscular and oh God, that's his beautiful tongue playing tricks on me again. I am muddled. Incoherent.
Shaking, moaning: is that him or me? Do I care? He is over me, around me. In me. I am surrounded by him. This is real. This is happening. This is more than any fantasy I could have ever dreamed up. His movements are fluid and controlled. Mine are not. I am lost in a haze of sensation. Crying out; panting, begging. I forget my name, where I am. All that matters is us, in this moment.
After, kissing me, he whispers in that husky voice that I love: "I have imagined this so many times."
Reality far outweighs fantasy.
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)
Maggatha---this one is for you! Written so very long ago on a whim. Hope you enjoy this little sliice of Mick and Beth
Alle--thanks so much for tracking this down.
Alle--thanks so much for tracking this down.
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My pleasure, honey. It's a wonderful little story! You should write more, now that you've got an office.
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)
Who claims you are not a writer? This is writing, isn't it? This is good writing even, maybe even great writing. I was just there with Beth, and felt what she felt, and need a cold shower now. So this is great writing in my book.
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So I'll admit, this one I didn't remember... My bad! Your good.
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Fleur thank you for the gift. One wonderful ,hot and so very real story for me, in return for a gorgeous banner that I didn't even create myself. Gee, do I make a good deal???Fleur de Lisa wrote:Maggatha---this one is for you! Written so very long ago on a whim. Hope you enjoy this little sliice of Mick and Beth
Thanks, Fleur!! Now that you have an office and obviously a great hand, think about it!!
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Francs--thanks! When we sent Alle on her search, I'd completely forgotten about this one. So glad you enjoyed it.
Grace--after you mentioned the Mick is a republican fic, I recalled it. This one? Totally escaped me.
Maggatha--now that I think about it, you did get a great deal! Red makes us both beautiful banners and you got a little fic. Well played!!!
Grace--after you mentioned the Mick is a republican fic, I recalled it. This one? Totally escaped me.
Maggatha--now that I think about it, you did get a great deal! Red makes us both beautiful banners and you got a little fic. Well played!!!
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)
Fleur! This is fabulous! You've been holding out on us.
I loved this:
I loved this:
It made me smile, but beyond that it felt so very "true." This a wonderful first-person account. It made me feel all the right things -- a little giddy, a little breathless -- and isn't that what good writing is supposed to do?Fleur de Lisa wrote:I need to breathe, just breathe. Last night when I dreamt this, I was able to breathe.
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Lilly wrote:Fleur! This is fabulous! You've been holding out on us.
I loved this:
It made me smile, but beyond that it felt so very "true." This a wonderful first-person account. It made me feel all the right things -- a little giddy, a little breathless -- and isn't that what good writing is supposed to do?Fleur de Lisa wrote:I need to breathe, just breathe. Last night when I dreamt this, I was able to breathe.
Lilly Yep, it wasn't difficult to come up with the 'just breathe' line, because I remember several instances of Mick scenes where I had to remind myself of the same thing! He had that ability to maybe you forget to breathe.
Still does.
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WOW. Absolutely stunning.
You should write more. Mick & Beth are in very good hands with you.
That line just made me go all kinds of .His mouth continues the loop across my upper body. Oh God. The tongue swirling, licking, rasping. The lips sucking and kissing. His teeth biting and teasing. Are those his fangs? Oh yes, the fangs have come out to play. Suddenly, this is real. Fantasizing about this moment is nothing compared to the reality of it.
You should write more. Mick & Beth are in very good hands with you.
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Fleur de Lisa wrote:Francs--thanks! When we sent Alle on her search, I'd completely forgotten about this one. So glad you enjoyed it.
Grace--after you mentioned the Mick is a republican fic, I recalled it. This one? Totally escaped me.
Maggatha--now that I think about it, you did get a great deal! Red makes us both beautiful banners and you got a little fic. Well played!!!
It isn't like us to forget a smut fic.
I blame the Chardonnay.
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Fleur - No hiding your light under a bushel. I love this.
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Coco-- Thank you!
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I don't know about Beth, but I promise you, Mick would be in very good hands with me.
What, people? Like you didn't expect me to jump all over that?
Grace-- I know. What the hell? I blame the Prosecco. Its been a vey Prosecco filled summer for me and the forecast for fall is looking similar.
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.Mick & Beth are in very good hands with you
I don't know about Beth, but I promise you, Mick would be in very good hands with me.
What, people? Like you didn't expect me to jump all over that?
Grace-- I know. What the hell? I blame the Prosecco. Its been a vey Prosecco filled summer for me and the forecast for fall is looking similar.
Cassy-- this was a quick step out of my box because I was surrounded by, and read so much, amazing ML fanfic. Those early days of ML? I devoured the fics.
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Fleur de Lisa wrote:Coco-- Thank you!
--.Mick & Beth are in very good hands with you
I don't know about Beth, but I promise you, Mick would be in very good hands with me.
What, people? Like you didn't expect me to jump all over that?
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Fleur
This is absolutely fabulous!!!!!!!!
You are a superb writer!!!!
Thank you!
This is absolutely fabulous!!!!!!!!
You are a superb writer!!!!
Thank you!
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