Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)

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Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)

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A new 100 word, between the lines drabble for the “Keep It Short” challenge. From the ending of Sonata. You could even consider it Valentine themed. :hearts:

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Characters: Mick and Beth (as if you didn't know :laugh: )



How can you remember that?

How can I remember the moment I let you see me after twenty-two years? I remember everything about you. Your flannel nightgown, your fear and your trust the night I rescued you. The look on your face when I told you I’m a vampire. The trust when I told you how I was turned. Your caress when you called me your guardian angel. The red gown and your happiness when we danced. When you first kissed me. When I first kissed you. Why do I remember all these things? It’s easy.

Because I love you.



And I've just noticed none of my other drabbles ever made it over here! I'll have to remedy that.
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Oh.... :cloud9: :hankie: :melts: :happysigh: :heart: :hearts:
That's just... perfect. :hug:
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This is just lovely!

Of course he remembers! He keeps each and every memory of Beth preserved, They are very precious to him.

In a way the story of Moonlight is so much like the old Greek story of Pygmalion, who created a statute of the perfect woman and then fell in love with his creation. I know, in some ways that doesn't make sense, but I have always thought some of Beth's personality traits come from being watched over all her life.

Happy sigh! :melts: :melts: :melts:

Wonderful!

Jenna

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Thank you so much allegrita and jenna! I'm happy you liked it! :flowers:

Kind of a mushy one, wasn't it? :rose: :laugh:
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I love mushy.
This is great!! :heart:
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:heart: :happysigh: :cloud9: :hearts: :melts:

That's lovely MLC! Thank you! :flowers:
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:chin: hey, most men would not even remember half of it...
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maggatha3 wrote: :chin: hey, most men would not even remember half of it...
Mick of course not being like "most men". :giggle:

Thanks for reading and commenting, maggatha, francis and fairytoes! :flowers:
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I believe I read this over on MLF, but no matter where I read it, it's still just absolutely wonderful and encapsulates Mick's feelings for Beth in that span of a few seconds between question and answer.
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Wonderful!

And I love mushy, too.

Mushy and Mick..... :melts:
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Thank you Moonlighter and Jen! :flowers:

Angsty Mick, vampy Mick, mushy Mick... I love them all! :cloud9:
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Exactly!!!!

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This sums up Mick's feelings in a nutshell or drabble :biggrin:
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Thank you cassy! Been awhile since I read this one. Thanks for the bump and the comment - I'm glad you liked it! :flowers:
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Aww... I love this one. So very Mick... all those amazing thoughts are running through his mind, and what he says is so simple... but succinct. :happysigh:
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