You did a wonderful job of describing Josef and Mick's friendship.
I love how you added in period details, such as this one. They really help to make the story complete.A gun-metal gray box with a screen sat towards the side, with a flat typewriter keyboard in front of it.
"What the hell is that?"
Mick's new life really did start that night - with a new home, a new case, a new person to be a guardian angel to, and a new regret....
Thank you!