Knowledge - PG-13(Slash) (M/J)

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Re: Knowlege - PG-13(Slash) (M/J)

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AussieJo...thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

SBJ, high praise indeed coming from you - thank you, my friend. :) This was an interesting study in pushing the envelope for me, and I'm ever grateful to Red for shoving me out of the nest.
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Re: Knowlege - PG-13(Slash) (M/J)

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It's ages since I read this. One of the things I love about it is that you didn't just accept the challenge, you threw yourself into it wholeheartedly, and the results are glorious.

It's got that fabulous mix of intrigue and eroticism:
PNWgal wrote:A tongue sliding seductively over Mick’s jugular.

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His eyes fluttering shut as Josef’s lips brushed over his.

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Another whisper against heated skin. “Trust me, Mick.”

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A moan at a kiss pressed to the hollow of his throat.

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Cool air against suddenly exposed, wet skin.
:hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

And just a dash of tenderness, so carefully reminding us that Mick, like all of us, is a product of his times:
PNWgal wrote:Waves of acceptance crashing against prejudices and preconceived emotions. Bodies rocking and tears washing the remnants of taboo aside
Hot, beautiful. And did I mention, hot?

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Re: Knowledge - PG-13(Slash) (M/J)

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Red... :hug: Thank you, honey.

My first and only attempt at slash...so far. :winky:

It was a GREAT challenge for me, to write something out of my comfort zone AND to make it erotic but not graphic. I'm so glad you presented this challenge and am tickled you liked it so well!

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Re: Knowledge - PG-13(Slash) (M/J)

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Back for a re-read. This is simply sensational. There's no clear motive other than his lustful curiosity and the way you write it, it's all that's needed to make this scenario completely believable. And erotic. Did I say erotic? I meant erotic as hell! Someone gimme some ice! :devil:
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