FULL MOONLIGHT---Ch 28---Messages. (PG-13)

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Re: FULL MOONLIGHT---Ch 28---Messages. (PG-13)

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Thanks, Jen! :flowers:
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How sad!

I just ache for Beth. She is responsible for Mick and Josef still being among the living. She avenged the attack and sent a message to the Legion that has been received loud and clear.

The dialogue between Claudia and Phelan when she was explaining about the bullets was brilliantly done. You clearly showcased Claudia's expertise and a bit of attitude, as well. Phelan is so wonderfully straightforward and direct.

One more chapter to go for now

Thanks!

Jenna

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Fabulous, fabulous chapter!!!

Claudia's explanation about the bullets was amazing. She is so knowledgeable and you are excellent with those details.

This gives us an opportunity to see the Cleaners in action!

Fabulous!

Thank you!

Jenna

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Poor Beth! She did so well but she will now have the same wallowing that Mick had. :comfort:
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