Just An Accident (PG-13) (Dr. Feelgood 1)
Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 3:30 pm
This was a challenge to write a turning of a minor character, first person POV and under 1000 words.
This is from the POV of Dr. Jeffrey Pollock.
Disclaimer: Moonlight doesn’t belong to me. I know. But I don't make any money with it.
Driving at night is a calming experience for me. I like my night shifts just for the part of getting there. There is fewer traffic around, which is a blessing in itself if you live in LA. I don’t turn on the radio, I just enjoy the cool night and the quiet. Today was no exception.
I was a bit concerned because of the pain medication I had been given. I came from an appointment at the dentist to get a molar extracted. Tomorrow, after the bleeding stops, I will get a new one inserted into the bone. And I was advised not to drive, and not to go to work, but I had to take a shift for a friend. Well, it wasn’t brain surgery, was it? Just on call at Internal.
Suddenly I startled out of my thoughts, as the car before me, which was a bit too fast, swerved and then ran a person over before I could even blink. Instead of stopping, the car drove on. It was a silver car, but I did get neither number nor model.
Instantly I stopped my car, actuated the warning lights and ran over to the man lying in the middle of first and main.
„Sir, sir can you hear me? Sir? Are you allright?“
He was probably 50 years old, sparse hair, thin. He was lying on his back, unmoving. Probably internal bleeding, surely a concussion. I kneeled down and searched for the pulse.
„Everything’s gonna be allright. I’m a doctor.
I’m just gonna feel your neck a little bit, okay?“
He coughs up. His blood gets into my mouth, but I am too busy searching for his pulse and too confused about not finding any when he clearly is alive to care. I am not squeamish with bodily fluids, else I wouldn’t be a doctor.
„Stay with me, come on!“ I frantically search for his heartbeat, there is none. I am at a loss what to do? CPR only works when the person is clearly unconscious, you know. Which happens normally when you don’t have a heartbeat. But this man is lying there and is clearly conscious, just has his eyes closed.
If I thought this was odd when he had his eyes closed, I wasn’t prepared for what happened when he opened them.
I have only time to notice his eyes are silverblue and gleaming, when he lunges up at me, takes my head and shoulders into a dead grip that defies a dying man and bites me hard into my neck.
Hell, that hurts. What happens here? Why does he do that? Does he have a mental problem? Is he confused because of the accident? But he seems to know exactly what he does. There is some kind of snarl, then a growl, and then an almost content purr against my acromioclavicular.
The blood loss is enormous. When did we switch places here? I am the doctor, he should be bleeding to death. Or shouldn’t. As I was about to help him.
My thoughts become muffled. I have cardiac arrhythmia. A man can only loose 40% of his blood before he faints. How much did he take? And why doesn’t he throw up? Noone can tolerate to drink even their own blood.
Everything fades away. Blackness envelops me.
It must be later. I am lying on the concrete, a mirror image of the accident victim I tried to help. I get up, my limbs feel different. I need to run.
I am running through the city, restless, not knowing what to do. It is dark. It is too hot. The city is too loud. Something is wrong. Why didn’t I get back into the car?
I am so hungry.
This is from the POV of Dr. Jeffrey Pollock.
Disclaimer: Moonlight doesn’t belong to me. I know. But I don't make any money with it.
Driving at night is a calming experience for me. I like my night shifts just for the part of getting there. There is fewer traffic around, which is a blessing in itself if you live in LA. I don’t turn on the radio, I just enjoy the cool night and the quiet. Today was no exception.
I was a bit concerned because of the pain medication I had been given. I came from an appointment at the dentist to get a molar extracted. Tomorrow, after the bleeding stops, I will get a new one inserted into the bone. And I was advised not to drive, and not to go to work, but I had to take a shift for a friend. Well, it wasn’t brain surgery, was it? Just on call at Internal.
Suddenly I startled out of my thoughts, as the car before me, which was a bit too fast, swerved and then ran a person over before I could even blink. Instead of stopping, the car drove on. It was a silver car, but I did get neither number nor model.
Instantly I stopped my car, actuated the warning lights and ran over to the man lying in the middle of first and main.
„Sir, sir can you hear me? Sir? Are you allright?“
He was probably 50 years old, sparse hair, thin. He was lying on his back, unmoving. Probably internal bleeding, surely a concussion. I kneeled down and searched for the pulse.
„Everything’s gonna be allright. I’m a doctor.
I’m just gonna feel your neck a little bit, okay?“
He coughs up. His blood gets into my mouth, but I am too busy searching for his pulse and too confused about not finding any when he clearly is alive to care. I am not squeamish with bodily fluids, else I wouldn’t be a doctor.
„Stay with me, come on!“ I frantically search for his heartbeat, there is none. I am at a loss what to do? CPR only works when the person is clearly unconscious, you know. Which happens normally when you don’t have a heartbeat. But this man is lying there and is clearly conscious, just has his eyes closed.
If I thought this was odd when he had his eyes closed, I wasn’t prepared for what happened when he opened them.
I have only time to notice his eyes are silverblue and gleaming, when he lunges up at me, takes my head and shoulders into a dead grip that defies a dying man and bites me hard into my neck.
Hell, that hurts. What happens here? Why does he do that? Does he have a mental problem? Is he confused because of the accident? But he seems to know exactly what he does. There is some kind of snarl, then a growl, and then an almost content purr against my acromioclavicular.
The blood loss is enormous. When did we switch places here? I am the doctor, he should be bleeding to death. Or shouldn’t. As I was about to help him.
My thoughts become muffled. I have cardiac arrhythmia. A man can only loose 40% of his blood before he faints. How much did he take? And why doesn’t he throw up? Noone can tolerate to drink even their own blood.
Everything fades away. Blackness envelops me.
It must be later. I am lying on the concrete, a mirror image of the accident victim I tried to help. I get up, my limbs feel different. I need to run.
I am running through the city, restless, not knowing what to do. It is dark. It is too hot. The city is too loud. Something is wrong. Why didn’t I get back into the car?
I am so hungry.