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Moment in Time (PG-13)

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This is just a short bit of fluff. I was in a romantic mood when I wrote it.


Moment in Time


I watch as lids lower, hiding eyes glazed by profound pleasure. Gilded brows furrow in concentration. Her skin is luminous, radiating artless beauty. Dewy, winsome lips part. Her exhale, my inhale. Such sweet, whispery breath. I can taste her trust like nectar on my tongue. Her body hums and answers my primal inquisition. I am consumed. She absorbs me, already owning all that is good. Opened eyes embrace me. A soundless declaration, yet deafening in its magnitude. They speak of love, of need. Need of me. Only me. Her eyes of sky - my portal to heaven. It is all I need. All I will ever need. This moment in time that will echo in eternity.
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GA, that was simply sublime....Beautifully written!
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Wow! I know there's a fainting emoticon, but is there a swooning one? 'Cause I'm swooning. Lovely.
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Very beautiful and poetic! Excellent!!!! Loved it!!!!

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Beautiful, sensual!!
Loved this line Her eyes of sky - my portal to heaven. :heart:
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Just beautiful! So much meaning in so few words. I love it! :clapping:
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Re: Moment in Time (PG-13)

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And wrote it beautifully, you did!

Sigh.

Very nice

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pure poetry, GA. Have you ever thought of formatting it as a poem?
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This is just gorgeous. Weighty with meaning, yet gloriously light and uplifting. I had missed it before and am just delighted to have found it today.

The layers of meaning here speak volumes...
GuardianAngel wrote: Her eyes of sky - my portal to heaven.
Just lovely, GA.
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Re: Moment in Time (PG-13)

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Thank you all so much. I'm often shy about posting stuff like this.

jen, I really appreciate that.

Luxe, no I haven't. I'm not much into poetry and it would probably suck. LOL

Lilly, thank so much. I'm glad you found it too. I don't know where the heck it came from - I just got this image in my head and there you have it.
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Fluff my a**. This is sublime.
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This is fabulous, GA. So intimate, so precious. No fluff at all. Well, maybe a bit, but I tend to love fluff. :hearts:
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Just stunning.

Thank you, GA!

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GA

You mentioned shyness with posting treasures like this

WHY????????

This is absolutely fabulous, richly romantic and a total joy!

Thank you!

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S-U-B-L-I-M-E !!!! Every word is absolutely perfect.
Sensual, sweet, romantic, what a beautiful picture of their love, their union of bodies and souls.
Thank you Guardian Angel, just thank you ! :flowers:

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