Man on the Street (vignette) --PG-13

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Fleur, you've got to realize by now, that with the riches of character and mythos, romance and setting, that we've been given with Moonlight, we're a long way from the end of original, creative moments....and as for me, well, I'm trying to please.

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librarian_7 wrote:Fleur, you've got to realize by now, that with the riches of character and mythos, romance and setting, that we've been given with Moonlight, we're a long way from the end of original, creative moments....and as for me, well, I'm trying to please.

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Thank goodness for that! I guess it just shows my lack of imagination----that is why I am constantly impressed by the new ideas you authors come up with.
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This was wonderfully haunting! I always enjoy outside POV fics, and this was so well done. :)
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I'm so glad you bumped this one, Laughter. It's an old favorite. I love this story, Lucky. Just love it. :rose:
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I read over it earlier...I sorta like it myself.

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Lucky

This is just all kinds of awesome.

I've been around here for three years pretty soon and somehow missed this wonderful fic.

That is a wonderful, wonderful gift. To find that there are fabulous fics like this that I haven't read makes me want to dive back into the library and hunt for other treasures I've missed.

Thank you!!

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Heck, jen, sometimes I'm not sure even I have read everything in my office! :2eyes:

Glad you found this. (And keep looking, you never know!) :snicker:

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I'm glad this got bumped... I had never read it before either. Very creative POV, and it makes perfect sense that other "creatures of the night" would notice Mick cruising in a vintage Benz. So was this guy a friend of LeeJay's? :snicker:

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Lilly reminded me of this story, and I had to go back and read it. Perfect for the week before Halloween... I love the flavor of it. This is a real gem, Lucky!

And MLC, that's a great question! I hadn't thought about the friend being Lee Jay, but it sure could have been... :chin:
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Heck, I'm not sure I ever thought about the friend being Lee Jay...although it's been long enough since I wrote this, it's possible!

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Just fabulous.

This is haunting. An odd mixture of bits of wisdom that come with years, insight and some interesting guesses, it gives us a thoughtful ghost story with lots of delicious visuals and other sensory tidbits to add spice to the recipe.

I like this unnamed narrator. Pity he never met that ghost. I think he'd like him,,,
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I could just see a foggy night the Benz and Mick always vigilante always alone. This was so good just the right amount of spooky. Damn you nailed it.
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