Pause (Mick, PG)

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WOW! Thank you, Red! I'm touched...and it's beautiful. :hearts:
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allegrita wrote:WOW! Thank you, Red! I'm touched...and it's beautiful. :hearts:
My pleasure - and thanks for your note. :smooch:

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Pure poetry. So in character, and absolutely beautiful.

Thank you!.
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Thanks, jen. :rose:
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Gah! This was gorgeous. As a sucker for any MickBeth fic, this ranks right up there among stories/drabbles that just describe their relationship down to the bare bones of it.
rijane wrote:I love the metaphor here - the idea that Mick has been holding his breath for 20 years resonates with me - everything about that metaphor works - the pressure, the relief, the release. I love that hard.

Another of my favourites is the "strange landscape of my past" line, that paints such a perfect picture of Mick that was before - I see him standing stark against a twisted background and moving toward Beth and her coming to meet him there (I see the hope as her light on the darkened plains).
Ri -- your comment was as evocative as the drabble itself.
rijane wrote:A very great work here in such a small space.

Brava!
You're so right -- it's a quick squeeze to my heart. Well said and I second the compliment to Red! :heart:
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Thanks, Moonlighter - and ITA about Ri's comment. :hearts:

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You write the most wonderful romantic drabbles.

Beautiful!

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I am a hopeless romantic, jen.

Yeah, yeah, yeah - newsflash. :roll:

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