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Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 10:28 pm
by one.zebra
Nice surprise...I missed the face needing attention, so I didn't get it until the end...
Wait, the cat's a vampire? He only drained them, not ate them? I know those cat fangs look like vamp fangs, but how the heck could you do this? Or..why?
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:54 pm
by fairytoes
Blue and Alle, I really loved this!!! Brilliant twist!!!! Well done!!
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:41 pm
by allegrita
It was really all Blue... I just asked for a story about Mick and Travis meeting up after Mick's a vampire again... and she came up with this wonderful vampire cat story. I love it. I'm glad it popped up again so I could give it a reread.
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:22 pm
by redwinter101
Okay, okay, you got me.
Bravo on sustaining the tension right up to the reveal - that's some skill.
Some lovely images during the hunt, too.
A thoroughly enjoyable read - and I'm glad you had fun working on it together.
Red
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:18 am
by janicevictoria
You guys really had me going there- I thought the hunter was a newly turned Beth! What a relief it wasn't! Very clever indeed ladies!
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 11:36 pm
by jen
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 10:27 pm
by jen
In the post immediately above. I had read this in the library. Now, Champaign Challenges brought me back for a reread.
I was so sure at the outset that you were talking about a human!!!!!
Fabulous!!!
Thank you
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 9:53 pm
by Moonlighter
Well here we go -- my Fanfic car is full of (non-BP) gas and revved up to go!
Bluedahlia and Alle -- this was great because you had me going up to the end. I was thinking it was Beth for a minute, but how glad was I to read it was Travis! I am a cat lover too, and therefore a Travis lover by default.
You described the predatory nature of a cat just right and as I read back through this, I see how you perfectly captured the little sneaky bastards! Adorable sneaky bastards, though. Thanks for the noir, the mystery -- and the laugh! Great job!
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegr
Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:26 am
by cassysj
Going back thru the challenges and this made me laugh again. I love Travis the vampire cat!
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegr
Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:41 am
by allegrita
Ooh, what a treat to reread this great story. I so enjoyed working on it with Blue. I miss her.
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegr
Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 8:18 am
by BlueEyedMonster
Still discovering the joy of fan fiction on this site. Fun story well done.
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2023 9:53 am
by allegrita
It's been ages since I read this wonderful story. Don't let my name being listed as a co-author fool you: this story was entirely
Blue's idea. I helped a bit with the mechanics, but it's all hers. And I love it.
Re: Creatures of the Night - Challenge# 106 (PG-13) W/Allegrita
Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2023 6:36 pm
by Ella713
Wow! What a twist! I didn't think it was Travis! He's a vamp now? Did Mick turn him? You really do some very descriptive writing it makes you feel like you're walking in the darkness alongside him.
