Fever Redux (or, No-Star Cell Service) [ch. 1] PG13

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Re: Fever Redux (or, No-Star Cell Service) [ch. 1] PG13

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This is just fabulous Nocturne.

What a delightful twist to Fever. :clapping:
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Re: Fever Redux (or, No-Star Cell Service) [ch. 1] PG13

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This is wonderful, Julie. Really wonderful. You capture Mick's anguish so brilliantly - and the Leni we all saw: feisty, strong, determined. She's wonderful:
NocturneInCMoll wrote:“What if I can’t control myself?” he said hoarsely.

“If you can’t control yourself, why am I still sitting here?”
So perfect.
NocturneInCMoll wrote:Mick squeezed his eyes shut tight, but a tear escaped. “What kind of monster takes blood from a pregnant woman?”

He felt a hard slap across his face and he opened his eyes in surprise. Leni was glaring down at him.

“A monster wouldn’t think twice about it.
Out of the mouths of babes...

This is such a wonderful scene and I can't wait to read more (although I did find this really tricky to read because of your formatting - maybe it's just me?).

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Re: Fever Redux (or, No-Star Cell Service) [ch. 1] PG13

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Wow, thank you so much, Red! :hug: ...but my formatting? What was it that made it hard to read?
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I'll PM you, Julie.
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Re: Fever Redux (or, No-Star Cell Service) [ch. 1] PG13

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Julie

Love this.

And anxious to read more!!!

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Re: Fever Redux (or, No-Star Cell Service) [ch. 1] PG13

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Thanks so much, Jen! Glad you like. I'll try and get on Ch. 5 as soon as I can, but my Moonlight muse has taken a leave of absence lately... :shrug:
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