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An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 8:43 pm
by francis
Disclaimer: I don’t own Moonlight, but I love to play with it.
PG-13 for reference of death and one swear word.



A gift, Mick thought.
She called turning him without consent a gift.

He and Coraline had a certain understanding,
they shared years and decades,
but he would never understand that.

She took his life, his family, present, past and future.
She took his choice to eat food, grow older, grow, dammit.
He wanted to grow, but was going in circles.

Nothing she gave him later could ever make up for that.

Then she tried to give him a child,
and again she was more than wrong.

But twenty two years later,
Beth was an unexpected gift that kept on giving.

Re: Drabble - An Unexpected Gift (PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 8:46 pm
by fairytoes
Brilliant Francis! :hug:

Re: Drabble - An Unexpected Gift (PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 8:57 pm
by cassysj
That is really amazing. It's true Beth was a surprise and truly unexpected gift.

Re: Drabble - An Unexpected Gift (PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 9:00 pm
by AggieVamp
that is a unique take on Coraline's gift - but it totally makes sense to me! And for Mick - it IS the gift that keeps on giving - which is the best kind of gift!

Karen

Re: Drabble - An Unexpected Gift (PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 9:26 pm
by SparklyBird
Francis that was brill. At least Coraline was good for something. :snicker:

Re: Drabble - An Unexpected Gift (PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 9:37 pm
by wollstonecraft61
I love how you find the unexpected in unexpected ways. Beth as the gift, so beautiful. :smooch:

Re: Drabble - An Unexpected Gift (PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 9:53 pm
by wpgrace
Oh my... kinda the show in a nutshell darling! Well done!!!!!!

Re: An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:30 pm
by PNWgal
Beth indeed turned out to be a gift, but not the way Coraline expected.

Lovely, francis. :hug:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:33 pm
by redwinter101
Lovely, francis.

At least Mick sees that everything that happened HAD to happen in order for him and Beth to find each other.

Red

Re: An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 11:12 pm
by Fleur de Lisa
Love it, francis.
Love the comparison of what each of these gifts are and what they mean to Mick. As much as I despise Cora, if not for her 'gift', there would be no Beth and Mick.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:01 am
by mitzie
Gorgeous!! So true, so true!!!! :yahoo: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :woohoo: :Mickangel: :seesaw: :yahoo: :yahoo: :clapping: :hearts: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: :notworthy: :heart: :hug:

mitzie

Re: An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:01 am
by jenstc2003
*Smiles* Lovely Francis!!!

Re: An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:33 am
by allegrita
Oh, Francis--how poetic! And how very true. Beth is the greatest gift Coraline could give Mick. And he'd never have gotten this gift without the other unwanted gift that Coraline gave him. Isn't it interesting how all of those things had to happen just the way they did, for Mick and Beth to be together?
Beautiful. :heart:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 1:33 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Very nice! I'm amazed you came up with that so quickly... it comes across with a ton of thought put into it.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (PG-13) Drabble

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:18 am
by GuardianAngel
The idea of a 'gift' put me in the same frame of mind as you, francis - Coraline's gift and how it was unwanted (vampirism) but turned out the be unexpectedly good (Beth).

I enjoyed how Mick mentally works through it. He just has to be open to it.

"gift that kept on giving". Couldn't help but think of Beth's blood. Yup, keeps on giving.