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Re: Dust --Chapter 5 PG-13
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 8:20 pm
by greenleaf9
Re: Dust --Chapter 5 PG-13
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 8:23 pm
by librarian_7
Thanks, greenleaf...I'll be happy to add you to my update list. (You've seen there's a chapter 6 out, right?)
And so glad you're enjoying the story, too!
Lucky
Re: Dust --Chapter 5 PG-13
Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 1:20 am
by redwinter101
And so the plot thickens. I should have mentioned earlier how much I love Josef as a high-stakes gambler BTW - it's just so perfect.
Red
Re: Dust --Chapter 5 PG-13
Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 10:19 pm
by coco
The plot thickens
Lucky!
Re: Dust --Chapter 5 PG-13
Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 3:44 pm
by Phoenix
“What about the other one?” Roberts demanded. “She still out? It won’t make any difference.”
Josef scowled. “She’s dead. Does that make a difference?”
“Huh.” Roberts shrugged. “Shoulda left her behind. Well, we can toss the body on garbage heap.”
I am sorely tempted to call Roberts a pig - but I don't want to insult any pigs.
Re: Dust --Chapter 5 PG-13
Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 4:34 am
by Shadow
Poor Josef, nothing's going too well here ... that many men in the encampment is a bit much even for him!
It's so nice how protective he is of Sally, and how much he still loves the company of the mortal ones.
Re: Dust --Chapter 5 PG-13
Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 1:54 pm
by redwinter101
The dialogue here is fantastic - Josef, a wonderful mix of cool and irritated and Slade, with enough sense to take the measure of the man. Roberts is also such a great minor character - thoroughly horrid, but necessary and beautifully drawn.
Red
