The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)
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Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)
And this is for you, dear Jo. Thanks so much - I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.
And that's an interesting thought for another one. Mmmmm must think on that.
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And that's an interesting thought for another one. Mmmmm must think on that.
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Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)
Wow.
Forget the tissues, I need a towel.
You are amazingly talented. That was absolutely lovely!
Thank you.
Forget the tissues, I need a towel.
You are amazingly talented. That was absolutely lovely!
Thank you.
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Thank you, jen, for the read and the lovely comment.
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simply stunned by this. the early line about vulnerability being private really got me in.. and that was just the beginning of the raw emotional honesty of this piece.
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Many thanks, Luxe. That's just lovely.
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Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)
That was wonderful, Red...just wonderful
I haven't been this affected by a story in a long time. Well done!
I haven't been this affected by a story in a long time. Well done!
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Thanks, Kelly.Kelly wrote: That was wonderful, Red...just wonderful
I haven't been this affected by a story in a long time. Well done!
*offers Kel a hankie*
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Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)
red,
right now, the only thing my stunned and blown mind can think to comment on is the decency of the cemetary caretaker. What an inherently decent thing to do, to let Mick stay, and to refuse Josef's money.
I'll be back with a longer comment later. Once I can actually process this amazing story.
right now, the only thing my stunned and blown mind can think to comment on is the decency of the cemetary caretaker. What an inherently decent thing to do, to let Mick stay, and to refuse Josef's money.
I'll be back with a longer comment later. Once I can actually process this amazing story.
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Thanks, gl9, the caretaker was a little ray of decency amid the gloom.
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Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)
I'm speechless ... I'm touched... I'm weeping ...
And first of all - I'm pondering ...
This last thing - your talent to force readers to pondering - makes your writing such good ...
And first of all - I'm pondering ...
This last thing - your talent to force readers to pondering - makes your writing such good ...
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Albra, I'm always so happy to see a comment from you, and I love that you were touched and that this piece made you ponder. Thank you.
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Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)
I knew how it will end for me
but I'm back - with big box of tissues.
One more time - Thank you
but I'm back - with big box of tissues.
One more time - Thank you
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Thanks, Albra. A re-read is so very precious.
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Thanks, Albra. A re-read is so very precious.
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Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)
Just reread it.... Red!
Still beautifully written, desperately sad, but showing so much love.
Still beautifully written, desperately sad, but showing so much love.
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Re-reads are SO lovely. Thanks, AussieJo.
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