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Enemies, Chapter 1. G-PG13

Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:33 pm
by moonlight_fan
Hey guys, after being asked by Francis :hug: , I decided to bring this story over here. I hope you all like it.

Disclaimer: Nope, not mine.
Chapter One

“Josef, please...I’m asking you as a friend. Do this for me?” Mick asked as he stopped pacing around Josef’s desk and placed his hands on either side and leaned across the desk with a desperate look on his face.

“Oh, not as a friend.” Josef sighed “Fine, fine, whatever...but if she gets in my way….she’s out, whether you're back or not!”

“Thank you Josef. It’s only for a week. What could possibly happen in a week?”

Three Days Later

“Tell me again why I have to stay with Josef?”

“You know why Beth. I’m going to New York on a case and I want to make sure you're safe when I’m gone” Mick sighed.

“There’s got to be something else. I mean, before you told me not to be alone with him for a second as he could kill me in a heartbeat. Now you're leaving me alone with him for a WEEK? What’s going on here?”

Beth was in front of Mick now. She had just finished packing for Josef’s. Mick realized that Beth had the stubborn look on her face. The same look she used when she was determined to get what she wanted.

She’s so cute when she’s angry Mick thought, a smile tugging at his lips. He knew she wasn’t going to let this drop unless he told her the truth. Mick sighed and looked at Beth defeated.

“While I’ve been working on the case, I’ve had a….a couple of threats….about you….and I just got a tip that whoever’s doing this is in New York, but that won’t stop them from sending someone here while I’m gone.” Beth’s eyes were wide at the thought of someone threatening her, and in a second she was in Mick’s arms as he tried to comfort her.

“It’s ok Beth. Don’t worry, I’m not going to let ANYONE hurt you.” Mick and Beth just stood there for a few minutes, content in each others arms.

A/N: What does everyone think? Reviews make me happy :)

Re: Enemies, Chapter 1. G-PG13

Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 1:36 pm
by Luxe de Luxe
intriguing start, MLF.

Re: Enemies, Chapter 1. G-PG13

Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:55 pm
by Kara
Uh-oh. Trouble magnet Beth left alone with snarky Josef? That's triple trouble if you ask me. :snicker: :giggle: Good start.

Re: Enemies, Chapter 1. G-PG13

Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 12:50 am
by jen
Wonderful start, but I'm not sure who to feel more sorry for, Beth or Josef.

:flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers:

Re: Enemies, Chapter 1. G-PG13

Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 12:26 am
by MickBethKiss
Wonderful! Very intruiging. :D

Re: Enemies, Chapter 1. G-PG13

Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 8:50 am
by maggatha3
Seems we have a thrill ride ahead of us...