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The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 7:57 pm
by GuardianAngel
This fic was in answer to a smutless smut challenge.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. They are not mine, never have been, never will be. Bummer, I know.


The Journey


My eyes open slowly. There's warmth and a gratifying sense of contentment. I fell asleep on the couch with Beth. It doesn't happen often. Usually I have to hit the freezer to get some shut-eye. But this was nice. Really nice. She fit into the small space between me and the back cushion perfectly, her head resting in the crook on my arm, her small hand splayed over my chest. I can smell the shampoo she uses, crisp and light. Nothing too sweet or floral for her. I smile. Something else that doesn't happen often. At least not until she walked into my life. Again.

Her hair, which has always reminded me of a halo of sunshine, obscures her face. I can't deny the impulse to move it out of the way. My fingers brush the golden strands behind her ear and then trace the line of her jaw to her lips. I love her mouth. Even in sleep the edges turn upwards in an almost-smile. It opens slightly as my thumb trails below her bottom lip. Her fingers move restlessly and she lets out a soft sigh. It's an invitation I can't refuse. I lean down and capture her mouth with my own. The kiss is soft, unhurried. She sighs into my mouth and I savor it on my tongue.

Her hands are no longer still. They roam and explore knowing just where to linger. I return the favor, fingers dipping and delving. Our bodies slide into each other. Rubbing. Warming.

I ease us into a new position. I want to cover her, look down at her and watch her expressions. My chest aches with pride that the longing I see there is for me. There can be no lies; her heart, her breath, her very blood speak to me, whisper to me her love.

She cradles me as I nestle into her, fill her. Time stretches as our bodies ripple and surge. It's a leisurely climb as we explore every path and foot-hole. No inch is untouched, no moment uncherished. The dusk absorbs our sighs.

As we approach our peek, Beth beckons and I take her blood, warming and filling my body just as she has my soul. Together we reach the pinnacle and leap. Our bodies strain, our holds tighten as we fall in rapture.

We linger in each others arms, too exhausted to move. Beth yawns and nuzzles my neck. Looks like we'll take another nap. This is nice. Really nice.

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:01 pm
by francis
Oh, I so love this. It's sensual, touching, warm, tender.
She fit into the small space between me and the back cushion perfectly, her head resting in the crook on my arm, her small hand splayed over my chest.
I can so see them lying there.

And I love your description of the actual love-making. There's nothing base or crude here.
Thanks.

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:05 pm
by Fleur de Lisa
I am going to quote you:

This is nice, really nice.

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:08 pm
by wpgrace
Oh I love this one... so like a lazy real life day... and so happy for Mick to have such a moment...

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:12 pm
by Raven
That was a lovely interlude, unhurried yet passionate.
Well done, GA.

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:26 am
by GuardianAngel
francis: I love you. I just LOVE you. Thanks for requesting this. I'm thrilled that you enjoy it.

Lisa: I want Mick to have these nice moments in the worst way. I'm glad you concur.

grace: Me too. It makes me happy for Mick to have such a moment.

Raven: Thanks! I'm glad the feeling I was going for came across. Unhurried is exactly it.

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:54 am
by mitzie
Lovely! Unhurried, serene and sensual!!

mitzie

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:28 am
by coco
GA I read this with the biggest smile on my face. I adore this :D

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 2:23 am
by starbucksjunkie
I love your love scenes, GA. Beautiful, sensuous, just a touch of eroticism. Like a canvas painted in broad strokes.

Just lovely.

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:20 pm
by Kelly
This was lovely...so very lovely. :clapping: Well done!

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 5:22 pm
by Albra
I love this ... romantic, affectionate, warm ...

Thank you

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:09 pm
by jmc
This is just perfect.
GuardianAngel wrote:Beth yawns and nuzzles my neck. Looks like we'll take another nap.
What a lovely idea.

:reading: Thank you.

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:15 pm
by helloeeze
I liked the fact that it made Mick so satisfied to know he slept through the night with Beth and the couch and how much it meant to him. So sweet is our vampire.

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:01 am
by jen
Oh, GA

Happy sigh.

:hearts: :flowers: :hearts: :flowers:

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:46 am
by jen
Should have reread this months ago.

Lovely, lovely piece.

Thanks!

Jenna