What Are You, Mick St. John? [ch. 5] PG13

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Thanks, Karen!

Beth is doing the best she can, but it's hard--because Carl and Josh are suspicious and Josh is jealous now, as well. Not much will stop them in their quest for the truth...
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I'm with lila. I *loved* Josh's outburst and Carl's embarrassment.

Beth was pretty cool under pressure - just like she should be. I can *feel* Carl and Josh's frustration building - they aren't stupid. They know something's not right. They just can't get a grip on what it is - every time they think they've got something tangible, it melts away.

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Carl and Josh just need to back off.
There, I feel better for having said that!
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Thanks, Red & Fleur de Lisa! Glad you're enjoying the awkwardness and intrigue :)

I can guarantee that Carl and Josh will not back off, though...
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I just started reading this. Very interesting a/u you've got going here. Mick's story is unraveling. This is probably what would have happened in ML, if they hadn't just ignored plotholes you could drive a Mack truck through. :snicker:
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Thanks so much, Catmoon! (did you read the prequel first, though? Some things in this story will make more sense if you did--because in this AU, Beth didn't kill Lee Jay, for one). Anyway, I agree with you about the Mack Truck-sized plot holes :roll: ...I'm trying to avoid those in here. Hopefully I succeed. ;)
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Uh oh. More lies. Mick without a shirt - she shouldn't have said that in front of Josh. And the car had to come up some time.
Beth cocked an eyebrow. “Okay…so? What are you suspecting, he spontaneously healed and is trying to keep it secret by showing everyone how not injured he is?” She pursed her lips, seeming amused.
Yeah. As if.
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The shirtless Mick thing just kinda came out :laugh:...she had to explain how she knew he wasn't injured. Definitely not the best thing to say in front of Josh, though... :snicker:
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