Join Me - PG

[PNWgal]

Drabbles are fun...



I wanna be close to you….


Christ, she’s so close I can hear her blood whispering to me. I’m tired of fighting her, tired of fighting this need to touch her, to be near her. She’s warm and she wants me—no, I can’t, I can’t. It’s the Crystal…it’d be wrong to take her …but she didn’t go to Josh, she came to ME and I want her, oh god I’d trade eternity for one taste of those soft lips. Just a taste, just a kiss and I’ll gladly go to hell for it…no…oh no…


Come on, Mick…join me…

[wpgrace]

More likely, particularly the protective of Mick part, what he WAS thinking than what he drifted-off into in The Proposal... but is it wrong that I like his little demented day dream in that one so much?

ETA: Ok weirdly I wrote this for the drabble about Josef... how did it end up in this thread?

I have now read Join Me... and this comment does not apply... but I like Beth's thinking and Mick's reaction to it...

[Fleur de Lisa]

Amazing how you can put so much longing and desire in so few words.

I always wished they would have gone back to that scene, maybe in a flashback sequence, to show Mick's thoughts and the struggling he must have gone through.

[coco]

I like this one very much

[starbucksjunkie]

Still so intriguing, this one.

[mitzie]

Very passionate drabble!! Loved it!!!!

mitzie

[janicevictoria]

Amazing how you can put so much longing and desire in so few words.

I always wished they would have gone back to that scene, maybe in a flashback sequence, to show Mick's thoughts and the struggling he must have gone through.

Yes, what Fleur said Have you ever thought of writing a longer version of this one? I'd love to follow Mick through the rest of that evening and the conflict and desire he must have had inside him

[francis]

Oh, how nice that this one popped up in Active Topics. I haven't read it in a while. I love this little glimpse into his soul. And Alex managed to make me really feel for him, really see what Mick went through without uttering a word. You did well in showing this. It could have been a voiceover.

[Moonlightsonata]

I hadn't read this before. This was great and I can still picture and hear in my mind Beth saying it. And the shower scene that followed was about the hottest thing I have ever seen where two people were fully clothed. Thanks.

[maggatha3]

So great PNWgal, so much love, lust and inner conflict in a few words... I have always thought how different the story would have been, had Mick given in that night...!

[Lucy]

WOW, now this was the right idea.....MICK, you won...Josh lost.....now carry the ball and make a touchdown.

[nutmegger911]

This is exquisite! It follows along perfectly with the body language in that scene - right down to the instant he started to crumble and lean in to take what was offered.

(How did I miss this?)

[PNWgal]

maggatha, no matter how many times I watch that, it never ends the way I want it to. Thanks for reading!

LOL, Lucy...

Thank you so much, NM. You KNOW Mick had to be tempted - I always wondered what would have happened if Beth hadn't pulled away.

[nutmegger911]

Wondered... fantasized... Potato... po- tah- to

I guess I could say the same.