Feed -- One shot (PG-13)

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SBJ,

so lovely, not a word spoken...everything conveyed by touch, sight, sound and scent....the mother, the magic momentarily overshadowed by fatigue, rises to the occasion with the gentle help of her lover. The little one, totally dependent, going through a routine as old as time, captivating the father who marvels at the miracle of love and life.

thank you so very much for this!!!
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lorig wrote: My kids are 11 months and 3 weeks apart. :o :shock:
Holy Diaper Bags! I'm wondering if you ever got out of your robe for the first year. :o

Thanks, dsr. That's what I was trying to convey. Glad you caught that not a word was spoken.

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Nikki!! this was beautiful, so heartfelt.
I could see it
Mick, the dutiful Father, Lover, Carer and Manservant.
And every role reverently cherished.
Sigh....!
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Brilliantly done, SBJ! So very sweet- challenge met and exceeded. It's great to see a new story by you, too!
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Hi SBJ,
Interesting take on the challenge. Very tender.
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I loved this sbj. The magic of creating life, the miracle and all its glory will remain just that...magic. Every infinitesimal sound and movement is a treasure to Mick...one he savors and nothing is insignificant. I loved this passage…Mick’s intuition is amazing…
He knew the magic of this moment had abated some for her, diluted by exhaustion, repetition, pain, and the smell of her own fluids.
Just lovely.
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This is beautiful....been a long time for me, but D-inL is very busy now....so glad I took the time with each...the deep satisfaction of having the baby grow in your body, then from your milk...

...I gott a tell you though, hubby NEVER got up to help! lol
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This is, in a word, lovely. Such a sweet and intimate moment, so shared by the participants.

Excellent work.

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SBJ: This is one of the most poignant (M/B) stories that I have ever read. When I saw the title, well, you know exactly what I immediately thought of, and this is so totally opposite! This story will be remembered by me as a classic here. I could see, feel and smell this! Memories of quiet, sleepy, yet exhausting times. Beautiful!
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lynnrxgal wrote:SBJ: This is one of the most poignant (M/B) stories that I have ever read. When I saw the title, well, you know exactly what I immediately thought of, and this is so totally opposite! This story will be remembered by me as a classic here. I could see, feel and smell this! Memories of quiet, sleepy, yet exhausting times. Beautiful!
Wow, lynn, thank you so much. I'm humbled. :hug:
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Wonderful SBJ. Don't know how I missed this. Came by it from a recommendation thingy in the Library. (By Red I think).
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Luxe de Luxe wrote:Wonderful SBJ. Don't know how I missed this. Came by it from a recommendation thingy in the Library. (By Red I think).
Thank you LdL for reading and stopping by! :hug:
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An absolutely lovely story...well done! :clapping:
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Thank you, Kelly! :hearts:
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I'm here from the recommendations thread. what a sensual little story. it made me reflect on the the similarities between breast feeding and a vampire feeding.
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