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Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 1:50 am
by jen
Don't own Moonlight. Certainly don't want to enfringe on copyrights
My dreams aren’t tethered when, in icy sleep
I walk again the paths of long ago,
The scents of life—of flowers, grass, moist earth, and heat
Are found again with senses I thought long forgot.
They seem so muted now, indistinct and imprecise.
That logic says I shouldn’t yearn for their return
And yet, I think I’ll mourn their loss as long as life is long and sunlight burns...
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 3:59 am
by librarian_7
Jen, this is very nice. Thanks!
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 4:01 am
by darkstarrising
This is lovely, Jenna, just lovely
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 4:36 am
by MickLifeCrisis
This is wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing!
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 5:01 am
by allegrita
What a gorgeous poem.
I love the imagery!
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 7:29 pm
by jen
Lucky
Thank you for the kind words!
Jenna
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 7:31 pm
by jen
Thank you, Karen!!
I wanted to capture too much, I think and only succeeded in about half, but this was a fun exercise!
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 7:32 pm
by jen
MLC
Thank you for reading and leaving the lovely comment!!
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 7:38 pm
by jen
Kind words refresh the soul--thank you so much! It seems they are getting rarer and rarer in the world today,
You are a fountain of kindness!
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2014 9:59 pm
by nutmegger911
This is nice, Jen. Poetic and evocative.
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2014 12:36 am
by jen
Thank you! I hadn't written anything in ages and had forgotten how much fun it is.
When i remembered I went back and wrote another seven lines
Jenna
Re: Frozen Dreams - PG
Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:12 am
by Shadow
So sad and lovely! Love the idea of Mick's vampire dreams being of all these human things, which are so faded now. Beautiful.