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Affairs of the Heart -Chapter 3 PG (Challenge 140)

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This is the third chapter (of 10) of 'Affairs of the Heart' and ML / H50 crossover story for challenge 140. In this story, Mick has finally agreed to turn Beth, but is dragging his feet. In the first two chapters, we saw an awkward parting between Mick and Beth as Beth left to spend a few days in Hawaii with Mary Ann McGarrett. Beth has now arrived in Hawaii and in his sister's absence, Steve McGarrett has driven Beth to her hotel on the North Shore. As Steve was escorting Beth to her cottage, someone else saw them. This chapter takes place the next morning.

As always, I don't own any of the characters, I just like to play with them.

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Affairs of the Heart

Chapter 3

The next morning, Beth woke early, her body still on LA time. In the pre-dawn darkness, she lingered in bed, still weary from the previous day’s journey and emotionally spent from her stalemate with Mick. What bothered her now was a slight headache and last night’s possible indiscretions.

Note to self; you can’t drink like you used to. Maybe it was the wine or maybe Steve is just so easy to talk to, but either way, I think I said waaaay too much. Mick and I have our problems, but every married couple does. OK, so maybe our issues aren’t typical, but they can be worked out. Leave it to Steve to point out that I’ve never asked Mick why he’s dragging his feet. I just assumed he felt guilty about turning me. But maybe there is more to it than that. When I get home, I’m going to find out.

The sun had not yet risen when Beth had breakfast on the lanai. The young man who delivered her meal seemed friendly enough, but a little nervous as well, glancing around her room as if he were looking for something. Whatever it was, he seemed puzzled when he didn’t find it.

After breakfast, Beth showered and dressed, anxious to see what the resort had to offer now that the sun was up. Hopefully, Mary Ann would arrive soon so that they’d have some time to visit and see the sights. Walking toward the main building, she encountered a little girl on the beach, alone and crying.

Beth crouched down to be on the little girl’s eye level. “Hey, are you OK?”

A simple head shake was her answer.

“What’s your name, sweetie? Are you staying at the hotel?”

The little girl nodded and whispered “Kylie. Kylie Simmons. I want my mommy”.

“Well Kylie, let’s get you back to your mommy, OK? Are you staying in the main part of the hotel or in one of the cottages?”

Kylie didn’t answer, but her eyes grew wide and she began to scream.

Turning, Beth gasped at seeing what had upset the child so, then positioned herself to block Kylie’s view. One of the hotel staff who had heard the screams came running, stopping dead in his tracks at the water’s edge. Holding Kylie close, Beth told the young man to call the police, then find Kylie’s mother.

Making sure the little girl’s view was blocked, Beth walked her away from the water, glancing back at the horror that had just washed ashore.

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Steve McGarrett woke abruptly to the sound of someone pounding on his front door. He didn’t know what was worse – having his rare Sunday morning sleep-in disturbed or that very pleasant dream he was having interrupted. Unfortunately, that same dream was going to make walking down the steps to open the door rather uncomfortable.

Whoever is out there better have a damn good reason ….

As soon as the door was opened, his partner stormed in. “What is the matter with you, huh? Do you have some kind of death wish or something?”

“Danny, it’s too early for this. What’s up?”

“You, apparently.” Danny shoved a copy of one of Honolulu’s sleazier tabloids at his bleary-eyed partner. “At least you had sense enough to come home last night. What the hell were you thinking?”

Splashed across the page was a picture of Steve and Beth entering her beach cottage, with the banner headline reading “Oh No! Married Mystery Woman Hooks Up with ‘Head’ of 5-0”. Underneath the picture were further teases about the use of handcuffs and ‘interrogation techniques’ in the lover’s nest.

Shit!”

“It gets better.”

Turning the page, a now wide-awake Steve found several more photos of Beth and himself getting out of his truck at the hotel, then walking down the path with him carrying her suitcase. The photo had been altered, but for anyone else seeing it, it would appear the couple was holding hands.

Fuck!!”

“For your sake, I hope you didn’t…”

“Danny!! Get serious!!”

“I am serious. Tell me you didn’t …”

“Of course I didn’t!!”

“What exactly did you do?”

“I picked Beth up at the airport, drove her to the hotel and carried her bag to her cottage.”

“That’s it?”

Steve sighed. “Not exactly. Since Mary was a no-show, I offered to spring for an early dinner in the hotel’s dining room. We had a few glasses of wine and talked, then I walked Beth back to the cottage and left. That’s it.”

Danny groaned and rolled his eyes. “That’s it, he says. How many people were in the dining room, huh? How many people saw you having dinner with a married woman?”

“I don’t know, maybe 20 or so.”

“Listen, Steven. For the rest of her visit, stay away from that woman. If she needs a ride back to the airport, hire a limo. I’ll pay for it.”

“Yeah, well the first thing I’m going to do is call Beth and apologize….”

“What part of Stay Away From That Woman did you not understand?”

Before he could answer, Steve’s phone rang. “Kono? Aren’t you on vacation?…..Yeah….OK…. Danny is here with me…. You don’t want to know….Listen, call Chin and we’ll meet at your location. We’ll be there in 40. And Kono? If Adam’s there, tell him to take a hike.”

“What? Kono caught a case?”

“Yeah…a body, or at least most of one, washed ashore this morning where Kono is staying. She said the head, hands and feet had been cut off….a signature Yakuza execution. A tourist found the body but a little girl may be involved as well.”

“That’ll give Max a challenge trying to ID the guy. Where’s Kono staying?”

“Same place Beth is….Turtle Bay.”

Shit! OK, listen to me. We’ll take my car and leave your truck here. No use in announcing your return. And Steve? I’m driving.”

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Josef didn’t knock on Mick’s door – he just let himself in, then proceeded up the stairs and through the gray door to where the younger vampire was sleeping. He thought about pounding on the freezer, or maybe just pounding some sense into his friend, but he didn’t need Mick any more pissed off than necessary.

Opening the freezer’s lid, Josef merely called his friend’s name. Fangs bared, Mick’s eyes popped open, silver in the room’s dim light. Seeing Josef, Mick reverted. “I have got to change the lock on my door.”

“You could put a dozen locks on…I’d still get in. Get dressed and come downstairs. We need to talk.”

With that, Josef left. A few minutes later Mick joined him and was handed a glass of crimson liquid.

“You didn’t come all the way over here to make me breakfast, Josef. What’s wrong?”

“Have you heard from Beth recently?”

If Josef’s solemn demeanor hadn’t already gotten Mick’s attention, his question did. “Not since she called last night while I was at your place. Why?”

Josef pulled out his tablet. “This was sent to me by an old friend on Oahu.”

Mick scanned the image, then shrugged. “So? Beth told me Steve was going to pick her up and drive her to her hotel. All this tells me is that’s what he did and some sleazy guy with a camera is trying to make something out of nothing. Remember Dean Foster?”

“Sadly, yes, as well as the danger he posed. This guy is causing trouble of a different sort, but is just as dangerous. Turn the page.”

The image of Beth apparently holding hands with McGarrett roused the vampire within.

He’s dared touch what is ours, without our permission….


“OK, you and I both know images can be altered. Beth would never cheat on me.”

“You sure about that?” Josef then opened an electronic folder of images showing Beth and Steve laughing and having dinner together, then the two of them heading back to Beth’s cottage.

Mick struggled to maintain control as the vampire within was fully enraged now.

McGarrett was warned…now he’ll pay.

“OK, I admit this looks bad…”

Josef erupted. “You don’t get it, do you? You’re losing her, Mick. You continue to deny Beth what she wants and needs. If you won’t turn Beth and let her know she means everything to you, she’ll look for someone who can give her what she wants.”

Mick snarled. “Don’t even think about turning her, Josef!”

“Believe me, I have. More than once. I’ve even thought about offering, but I can’t, I won’t do that to you.” More calmly, Josef added. “Besides, Beth’s made it clear she doesn’t want anyone but you to turn her.”

“Then what….”

“McGarrett is human and he looks like you. If you’re going to deny Beth eternity, she might see him as a surrogate she could be happy with as a human.”

Mick just blinked; would Beth really leave him for taking so long? All at once, a memory of a night on a rooftop returned. A memory of the first time he held Beth in his arms and kissed her deeply, his first tentative step to opening his heart to her. He was afraid then as well, afraid of hurting her and pleaded for her patience. Beth’s own plea came back to haunt him:

‘Just don’t take too long. You may have forever, but I don’t’


Christ, he’d been such a fool!!

“The proverbial ball is in your court, Mick. What are you going to do?”

“Get on the next flight to Oahu. When I find Beth, I’ll tell how much I love her and that I’ll turn her whenever she wants.”

After I beat the shit out of McGarrett

“Good. My jet is waiting. Pack and be ready to go in 10. And Mick, you’re going to do a lot more than tell her.”
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OK. I really was going to get up and start cleaning the living room. But then this appeared on my last look if anything new had happened.

It's almost like that paparazzo knew that Beth would be there,,, Mmmm....

I get that Josef was trying to make Mick see a point. However, I think he's made things way worse than they needed to be. This vampire jealousy thing does seem way out of proportion and Josef has painted a picture that just isn't true.

And clearly trouble found Beth with that little girl and the body. She doesn't even have to try to snoop, does she? :snicker:
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Just got home for an early lunch and thought I'd check the board (sooo much more fun than doing housework) and saw--ta daaaa (drumroll) a NEW chapter of "Affairs of the Heart" just when I'd resigned myself to having to wait for a week or more.

It's a GREAT new chapter! Mick has been given the wakeup call he badly needed--what has been right in front of him has snapped into sharp focus! Everyone knew that Mick was going to be flying to Hawaii, just as everyone knew that Beth would find trouble, and that photographer was the Hawaiian 'Dean Foster' but now we are getting into the delicious details that will play out wonderfully. DSR will see to that!!!

All Mick will need is a quick sniff to discover his fears are unfounded. That vampire sense of smell is so useful. I just hope he has the good sense to take a whiff before laying into poor Steve (alas, no good deed goes unpunished...)

Thank you!!!

Jenna

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Oh, man... is Josef really behind that paparazzo's sleaze?!? I don't like that. :madface: On the other hand, Mick should trust his wife. :madface:

On the third hand, :snicker: I think it might be a good thing for Mick to go to Hawaii and help solve the mystery. And with a haircut (why must you cut poor Mick's hair again??) :mdrama: the damage of that sleazy tabloid will disappear. And I hope Mick does take a good sniff when he arrives, so that he will calm the heck down and remember that Beth is not the flighty type!! Poor Steve gets beat up quite enough without Mick adding to the damage. :snicker:

I wonder who washed up on the beach...? Trouble always does seem to find Beth, even when she's not looking for it. :shrug:
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r1015bill wrote:OK. I really was going to get up and start cleaning the living room. But then this appeared on my last look if anything new had happened.

It's almost like that paparazzo knew that Beth would be there,,, Mmmm....

I get that Josef was trying to make Mick see a point. However, I think he's made things way worse than they needed to be. This vampire jealousy thing does seem way out of proportion and Josef has painted a picture that just isn't true.

And clearly trouble found Beth with that little girl and the body. She doesn't even have to try to snoop, does she? :snicker:
Thanks, Rhonda :hug: Nope, it's just like Josef said - trouble finds Beth. Josef may seem to be over-reacting, but there's method to his madness. As for the paparazzo :whistle:
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jen wrote:Just got home for an early lunch and thought I'd check the board (sooo much more fun than doing housework) and saw--ta daaaa (drumroll) a NEW chapter of "Affairs of the Heart" just when I'd resigned myself to having to wait for a week or more.

It's a GREAT new chapter! Mick has been given the wakeup call he badly needed--what has been right in front of him has snapped into sharp focus! Everyone knew that Mick was going to be flying to Hawaii, just as everyone knew that Beth would find trouble, and that photographer was the Hawaiian 'Dean Foster' but now we are getting into the delicious details that will play out wonderfully. DSR will see to that!!!

All Mick will need is a quick sniff to discover his fears are unfounded. That vampire sense of smell is so useful. I just hope he has the good sense to take a whiff before laying into poor Steve (alas, no good deed goes unpunished...)

Thank you!!!

Jenna

:hearts: :flowers: :hearts: :flowers:
Thanks, Jenna and you're very welcome :hug: Mick's heightened senses will help him, but he's also dealing with a very jealous inner vampire, one that wants Beth to be his mate. Part of Josef's goading here was to get Mick focused. Neither man believes McGarrett is stupid enough to do anything with Beth (knowing what he does about blood demons), but if Mick waits too long to turn Beth, she might get tired of waiting.

As for the chapter updates - there are seven more to go and the goal is to have this story fully posted before the beginning of season 3 (9/24/12), which is 10 days from now. That doesn't leave me much time, but I'm working to make the deadline. :quill:
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allegrita wrote:Oh, man... is Josef really behind that paparazzo's sleaze?!? I don't like that. :madface: On the other hand, Mick should trust his wife. :madface:

On the third hand, :snicker: I think it might be a good thing for Mick to go to Hawaii and help solve the mystery. And with a haircut (why must you cut poor Mick's hair again??) :mdrama: the damage of that sleazy tabloid will disappear. And I hope Mick does take a good sniff when he arrives, so that he will calm the heck down and remember that Beth is not the flighty type!! Poor Steve gets beat up quite enough without Mick adding to the damage. :snicker:

I wonder who washed up on the beach...? Trouble always does seem to find Beth, even when she's not looking for it. :shrug:
Thanks, alle :hug: In all honesty, Mick does trust Beth as indicated by his initial reactions to the pictures. It was only after Josef goaded him that he started to worry that Beth one day might get tired of waiting for him to turn her.

Mick will get to sniff a lot of things once he gets to Hawaii, but have no fear, his locks are safe in this story. :cloud9: Near the end of the story, he will get to unload on someone and it won't be for the faint of heart :whistle:
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I've got a couple of suggestions he could choose from... :devil:
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allegrita wrote:I've got a couple of suggestions he could choose from... :devil:
People or ways?
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Great chapter, DSR! :rose:

I love the way things are all tying together: Mick is on his way to see Beth, who is staying at the same resort as Kono, where a dead body was found by a "tourist" :winky: , and the murder is going to be investigated by 5-0! :gasp: Who is the little girl? And what is the deal with that room service guy? So many questions... I'm looking forward to finding out the answers. :hearts:

And the best part: Mick gets to keep his hair! :yahoo:

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darkstarrising wrote:
allegrita wrote:I've got a couple of suggestions he could choose from... :devil:
People or ways?
Oh, people... :snicker:
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Another great chapter.

Know what I love? Both Steve and Mick have their guy friends looking out for them. Danny and Josef each supplying advice and warnings.

Never in a million years would Beth cheat on Mick, but then you had Josef mentioning how much Steve looked like Mick, how he was human, a surrogate. Yep. All valid points!
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Fleur de Lisa wrote:Another great chapter.

Know what I love? Both Steve and Mick have their guy friends looking out for them. Danny and Josef each supplying advice and warnings.

Never in a million years would Beth cheat on Mick, but then you had Josef mentioning how much Steve looked like Mick, how he was human, a surrogate. Yep. All valid points!
Thanks, fleur :hug: To hijack one of Beth's lines from the series 'Who would cheat on this', this being Mick. No one, not unless they were stark, raving mad. Yes, Josef is looking out for Mick and Danny for Steve, but Josef has an agenda as well. Doesn't he always?
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