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Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:54 am
by jenstc2003
Awww.... this is fabulous Red!! Absolutely freaking fabulous. He can truly be honest in answering this, and I think he finally can be.

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:07 am
by redwinter101
allegrita wrote:Ohhhh, Red... this is just... oh, sigh... :happysigh: :happysigh: :happysigh:

This is one of those quiet moments--nothing big going on, no danger, no torment. Just communication. Just... communication!!! How magical is it that Mick is finally, finally able to tell her what's in his heart?!

I love your big stories, you know how much I love them. But sometimes, your little vignettes reveal soooo much about them. There's so much subtext... and, in this one, so much is actually said. I love this--I love that they are talking to each other. :hearts: :hearts: :hearts:
:heart: :heart: :heart: Thank you SO much. Mick's talking - he's still not exactly verbose, but he's getting there. :snicker: I love the little moments (they were the things I loved most about the show) and it does my heart good to imagine this Mick and this Beth living out their unwritten, but promising, future.

Red

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:15 am
by redwinter101
Lucky, thank you. It's so lovely to see a comment from you and I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Luxe,
Luxe de Luxe wrote:the gentle testing of notches, new partners finding the hollows that will allow them to ease themselves into one another.
that is such a beautiful description. Really beautiful. Thank you. :hearts: :hearts:

MLC, hugs to you, my dear. You are such a sweetheart. :heart:

dsr, thanks so much (and you pulled out my favourite bit :smooch: ).

Lupine, that's a beautiful compliment - I'm touched. Thank you. :flowers:

lorig, it's not intentional, I swear. Cross my heart. It just comes out like that, honest. :shrug: :shrug: But I think Mick with a hang-nail might be a challenge too far. :giggle:

jenstc2003, *waves* thank you, honey.

Red

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:22 am
by Albra
:reading: ... lovely ...
Thank you, Red
:rose:

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:50 pm
by redwinter101
:hearts: :hearts:

Thanks, Albra.

Red

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:27 pm
by toria1521
:wave: When you write about Mick and Beth, you make their characters and connection come alive. :heart:

Thank you, :hug:

toria :wave:

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 11:52 pm
by redwinter101
That's lovely, toria. Thank you so much. :hug: :hearts:

Red

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:19 am
by wpgrace
:happysigh:

Ya know, he never says many words, at least not voluntarily, but sometimes he still says A LOT.
Besides that expressive face and the killer voice, he uses words well. You are a perfect conduit for him... :cloud9:

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:24 am
by lynnrxgal
I can just close my eyes and see this conversation! Hard to believe that it is almost three years since the Moonlight magic captured us all! Excellent!

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 10:55 pm
by redwinter101
:smooch: Smooch for Grace.

:wave: Thanks for reading, Lynn. It is hard to believe it's nearly three years - and I'm still utterly enchanted. :cloud9:

Red

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:11 am
by Moonlighter
redwinter101 wrote:.... It is hard to believe it's nearly three years - and I'm still utterly enchanted. :cloud9:

Red
I know -- I am too. Totally enchanted...

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:39 am
by GuardianAngel
jen wrote:Lovely
I gave a big ol' sigh at the end of the reading and the word on my tongue was exactly the same. Lovely. Just freaking LOVELY.

The words and sentiments are pretty. But I think was really did it for me is Mick's willingness to finally open up. Finally ready to let Beth know him - really know him. For me, that's the ultimate commitment from him. You had me melting in my chair, Red.

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:09 pm
by redwinter101
Red < :heart: > Moonlighter.

GA, :cloud9: :cloud9: that's lovely. :hearts: I figured there had to come a point when Mick wants to share himself with Beth - we saw that start at the end of Sonata and it was never going to be quick or easy - but he'd get there, I think.

Red

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:36 pm
by francis
This is beatiful. I love how you describe them. It reminds me of their conversation in the Arbor bistro.
I love how Mick opens up, no longer resistant but teasing her a bit about it, because it's still not easy for him to open up, even when he wants to. He wants to share his life with her. Their love shines through every word.

And the last line could be so cheesy if it wasn't for how you lead to it. That way, it's perfect. I love that you turn cliché into not cliché, you know? Because a cliché is one because there's truth behind it, and you found it.
Thank you!

Re: Killing Time (challenge #117) - PG

Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:03 am
by redwinter101
Thanks, francis. :smooch:

Red