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Re: The Bet, Chapter 1 (PG-13)

Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 7:28 pm
by Penina Spinka
Better late than never. Here I am and I'm wondering what the bet was about. We know what was at stake. Your portrayal of eleven year old WRH is perfect. He'd probably like it. I also like what you think Josef imagined Mona's lips to be concealing.

Re: The Bet, Chapter 1 (PG-13)

Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 10:10 pm
by jen
You have tapped another fascinating aspect of Moonlight and we are very much the richer for it.

Thanks, Lucky!

Jenna

Re: The Bet, Chapter 1 (PG-13)

Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 4:15 am
by Marigold
There are so many great things about this story!

It is interesting, and unusual, to read about Josef interacting with a child (Oops, sorry - a young man :laugh: ). Great idea! :twothumbs:

I really like how you've incorporated so many famous works of art into this story. I almost feel as though I'm touring an art gallery. :laugh:

I'm looking forward to finding out what the bet was about. :chin:

I love your historical Josef stories, Lucky! :hearts: Thank you. :rose: