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Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 10:29 pm
by maggatha3
GuardianAngel wrote:My eyes open slowly. There's warmth and a gratifying sense of contentment. I fell asleep on the couch with Beth. It doesn't happen often. Usually I have to hit the freezer to get some shut-eye. But this was nice. Really nice. She fit into the small space between me and the back cushion perfectly, her head resting in the crook on my arm, her small hand splayed over my chest. I can smell the shampoo she uses, crisp and light. Nothing too sweet or floral for her. I smile. Something else that doesn't happen often. At least not until she walked into my life. Again.
Beautifully said! I can so easily picture them at such a quiet, lovely moment! They have earned the peacefullness you offered them in this piece. Such a poetic way of writing a MickBeth lovemaking. :hearts:

Re: The Journey (PG13)

Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:24 am
by allegrita
What a gorgeous, sensual, loving scene. It's a simple, unhurried, wonderfully UNcomplicated interlude of bliss. It makes me so happy to read this. :cloud9: :hearts: