Only A Thin Veil Remains [Ch. 3 - PG-13]

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Only A Thin Veil Remains [Ch. 3 - PG-13]

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Thank you for your support, but this piece is either in or bears similarity to a piece that is now intended for publication. Again, I appreciate your reviews and for reading!
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Oh. Is Tobias a vampire and she knows it? Why does she accept what he does to her? Leaving her locked in, without food, without explanation, still wanting her to go clubbing instead of feeding her first. I want to know more. This story is addictive.
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o.o
I need to make a note to answer that question later. Thanks so much for pointing that out. xD
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