A Bite of the Big Apple - Chapter 2 PG 13 MickBeth

[francis]

Oh my! I hope Beth didn't bite more of the Big Apple than she can chew. This Renault guy is dangerous.

And that reminds me my first car was a Renault. The brakes were dangerous, too. Mainly cause they didn't work...

[jen]

Francis

Scarey!

Personally,I have encountered brakes that don't work and you feel like you are trapped!!! Kinda like Beth is here.

Hope the car you drive now has really, really good brakes!

Thank you so much for reading and leaving the lovely comment!

Jenna

[jen]

Something got me editing today and I started with this story.

Hope it helped.

[Marigold]

OH NO! I hope that Beth is able to hold Renault off until Mick tracks them down.

I think it is time for Renault to pay a visit to N.Y.'s equivalent of the tar pits...

I enjoyed Josef and Mick's chat about Sarah.

Thank you, Jenna! Nicely done!

[jen]

Marigold:

Renault is definitely not a nice guy.

Even worse, he enjoys it.

Beth is definitely the 'damsel in distress' presently, but Reenault may be used to women giving up and knowing their place.

Don't think it's gonna happen here.

Thanks for reading and leaving the great comment!!!

Jenna