Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Thank you, Albra and Alle and francis. I do suffer so for the sake of the prose...
She makes me read about Josef -- ALL of the time. ...snarking, biting, turning on the vamp charm, while in various states of undress... I'm asking you, how much can one woman be expected to take?? But I will endeavor to carry on -- for your sakes.
She makes me read about Josef -- ALL of the time. ...snarking, biting, turning on the vamp charm, while in various states of undress... I'm asking you, how much can one woman be expected to take?? But I will endeavor to carry on -- for your sakes.
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Wow!
I was nosing around in an area I hadn't visited before and found this listed in 'Active Topics:--I certainly see why!!
This is fabulous, Lucky!!! Hmmm. Amnesia can be caused by a physiological event or a psychological one.
Anxious to see where you take this!!
Thanks!!
I was nosing around in an area I hadn't visited before and found this listed in 'Active Topics:--I certainly see why!!
This is fabulous, Lucky!!! Hmmm. Amnesia can be caused by a physiological event or a psychological one.
Anxious to see where you take this!!
Thanks!!
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
My beta...she's selfless, that way. I'll just have to think of more various states of undress...Lilly wrote:Thank you, Albra and Alle and francis. I do suffer so for the sake of the prose...
She makes me read about Josef -- ALL of the time. ...snarking, biting, turning on the vamp charm, while in various states of undress... I'm asking you, how much can one woman be expected to take?? But I will endeavor to carry on -- for your sakes.
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
This was a reread but it drew me right in.
Josef's trademark snark was perfectly en tact. His memory, not so much.
I really hope there is another part to this. It is fabulous!!!
Thanks, Lucky!
Jenna
Josef's trademark snark was perfectly en tact. His memory, not so much.
I really hope there is another part to this. It is fabulous!!!
Thanks, Lucky!
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Well, jen, I have started a new part to this, but I'm probably not going to finish it anytime soon. Too many irons in the fire.
On the other hand, don't rule it out...I'll probably get around to it one of these days.
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Oh, Lucky -- you just have to find the time to continue this little gem!! Even if you only make it into a two-parter, it will be worth it just to find out what in the world happened to Josef!! I love that he forgets almost everything except his suit and car preferences. Oh, and that Nagano kid. And slugging down a glass of blood without total recall that he is, in fact, a vampire is amazing. How about a conclusion for Mick's sake -- he can't leave this mystery unsolved, can he? Of course not!
Super story as it is, though. Thanks!
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This is amazing!
And another chapter is totally worth waiting for!!!
Thank you!!
Jenna
And another chapter is totally worth waiting for!!!
Thank you!!
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Fabulous snarky Josef even without his memory.
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Josef Konstan...some kind of vampire? Well, the best kind, dear, the best!
Will you give us some more, Lucky? Josef and Mick in that situation...begging you
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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Ok just read this for the second time,loved it as much as I did before. I know we're greedy but more please , this is such an intriquing story, you know I love your writing, and I always want more