His Blood (PG-13) Mick's wedding night from an unusual POV
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Re: His Blood (PG-13) Mick's wedding night from an unusual POV
I'm so, so behind in my reading ... just found this for the first time.
It's truly wonderful -- not just a fascinating and original idea for the point of view, but perfectly brought off as well.
And I love the idea that the sire is also changed during the turning. That explains a lot about Coraline .....it really fits.
Brilliant.
It's truly wonderful -- not just a fascinating and original idea for the point of view, but perfectly brought off as well.
And I love the idea that the sire is also changed during the turning. That explains a lot about Coraline .....it really fits.
Brilliant.
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Re: His Blood (PG-13) Mick's wedding night from an unusual POV
Thank you, Shadow!
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Wow, I don't remember if this was posted anywhere else, I don't remember reading it before. Very good. Interesting point of view and I loved how you summed up what happen. In her haste Coraline botched Mick's turning. She never really knew him and paid it.
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Thank you, moonjat.
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Thank you maggatha! I'm glad you liked it.
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Re: His Blood (PG-13) Mick's wedding night from an unusual P
Francis. this is my first time of reading this story. And it's amazing! Something so seemingly unable to communicate and you give it such a powerful voice. It's wonderful, lovely. I also think it's a wonderful idea that even while Mick lay unconscious, his blood wanted to be avenged. It's inspired honey. Thank you so much for sharing it.
“It is not death that a man should fear, but he should fear never beginning to live.”
― Marcus Aurelius.
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Re: His Blood (PG-13) Mick's wedding night from an unusual P
Thank you, chocciterri!
There's a kind of sequel in my office, if you like to read more.
There's a kind of sequel in my office, if you like to read more.
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Re: His Blood (PG-13) Mick's wedding night from an unusual P
This is the first time I've read this, francis! (Apparently I live under a rock.) Very creative and thought provoking. I liked this:
Well done!
All the goodness that is Mick is in her now, and she can't stand it. I hope it was a constant reminder to her of what she took from him.Mick’s essence is filling her; his conscience, his kindness, his utter honesty and straightness is making her blood boil with repulsion.
Well done!
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Re: His Blood (PG-13) Mick's wedding night from an unusual P
Oh my gosh, I'm so glad this got bumped up. I think I read it long ago and far away... and I sure hope I commented on it then. It's such an innovative viewpoint, such a powerful way of showing the story of Mick's turning. I just love this story. Especially the concept that the blood of the victim infiltrates and changes the vampire who takes it.
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Re: His Blood (PG-13) Mick's wedding night from an unusual P
Thank you so much, MLC and allegrita, for the lovely comment.