Sleeping Beauty Drabble PG-13

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Sleeping Beauty Drabble PG-13

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I wrote this for ML4E

I do not own any recognizable characters no copyright infringement is intended.

"I hope the universe is on your side."

Mick realized in the end it all came down to that. The universe was with Coraline the night he was turned. The universe was with Beth the night he saved her from a fate worse than death.. The universe was with Josef when the assassin arrived but it wasn’t with Sarah in 1955. Was it fate? Would the universe be with him regarding Beth or would it be with Josh? If she chose him could he tempt fate twice by turning her? Would she insist? God, help me make the right choice.
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Beautiful, Carol, just beautiful Mick voice-over...so like Mick to put his life experience into few meaningful words. Well, as they say, when you want something really much, even the whole universe will conspire for you to get it...
-It never ends well...
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Thanks maggatha. Drabbles are hard for me being limited to 100 words. :laugh: I'm much chattier by nature.
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Lovely drabble, cassy! This got Mick thinking!
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Cassy, this captures Mick's tormented thoughts wonderfully. Drabbles are hard. They make you be very disciplined with your word choices, so they really are an exercise. But often they are really fabulous, and this one is no exception.
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Cassy

Lovely drabble

It all comes down to that. Beautifully done!

Thank you!

Jenna

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allegrita wrote:Cassy, this captures Mick's tormented thoughts wonderfully. Drabbles are hard. They make you be very disciplined with your word choices, so they really are an exercise. But often they are really fabulous, and this one is no exception.
I had no idea drabbles should be below 100 words, it takes discipline and you have to control your thought and inspiration as well. Ha, maybe we should ask that the comments of drabbles should be less than 10 words!! Ooops, I failed already, Carol!!
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Maggatha, they actually have to be exactly 100 words. And that is really hard, sometimes!
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