Sense (9 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/23
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Oh FdL, we have indeed. Thanks so much for stopping by. I love that you love these
*whispers* I have new stuff here too.... Just sayin'.
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*whispers* I have new stuff here too.... Just sayin'.
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[quote="redwinter101"]Oh FdL, we have indeed. Thanks so much for stopping by. I love that you love these
*whispers* I have new stuff here too.... Just sayin'.
Red[/quote
...off looking for your new stuff....
*whispers* I have new stuff here too.... Just sayin'.
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...off looking for your new stuff....
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Re: Sense (6 drabbles, PG-13)
Haha.
A new Giuseppe story, some slash (G/PG) and Rubicon (although I think you might have read that one...).
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A new Giuseppe story, some slash (G/PG) and Rubicon (although I think you might have read that one...).
Always happy to point the way..
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Pardon the interruption of the conversation, ladies...
Rubicon is here?
I looked... am I missing something? Isn't that thread still empty? Am I even worse at this board stuff than I thought?
Rubicon is here?
I looked... am I missing something? Isn't that thread still empty? Am I even worse at this board stuff than I thought?
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No, you're right. Sorry - my bad. Will get it posted later (and hopefully the finale too!!!)wpgrace wrote:Pardon the interruption of the conversation, ladies...
Rubicon is here?
I looked... am I missing something? Isn't that thread still empty? Am I even worse at this board stuff than I thought?
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redwinter101 wrote:No, you're right. Sorry - my bad. Will get it posted later (and hopefully the finale too!!!)wpgrace wrote:Pardon the interruption of the conversation, ladies...
Rubicon is here?
I looked... am I missing something? Isn't that thread still empty? Am I even worse at this board stuff than I thought?
Red
Yeah well I had been checking right regular... thought I was totally losing what little capacity I have to navigate site boards, or to use my own sight...
And the coming of the finale is good good good good news.
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Re: Sense (7 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/14
#7 - Touch
Mick
I thought I’d felt everything. Fifty-five years of heightened senses, awake to every breath of wind, every whisper of fabric against my skin, heat, cold, pleasure, pain.
You block it out after a while, harden against its power.
But now I’m ready.
Her first, slow, fingertip stroke over me and my body responds, fresh and clean. She thaws a trail across me, reaching in, sure, urgent, her need meeting mine.
I pull her tight, precious heat spreading, my chill escaping in a shiver as I uncurl in her touch. She holds me and in her arms, I am alive.
Mick
I thought I’d felt everything. Fifty-five years of heightened senses, awake to every breath of wind, every whisper of fabric against my skin, heat, cold, pleasure, pain.
You block it out after a while, harden against its power.
But now I’m ready.
Her first, slow, fingertip stroke over me and my body responds, fresh and clean. She thaws a trail across me, reaching in, sure, urgent, her need meeting mine.
I pull her tight, precious heat spreading, my chill escaping in a shiver as I uncurl in her touch. She holds me and in her arms, I am alive.
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Re: Sense (7 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/14
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
I love the sense drabbles. I know I commented on them somewhere else, but not here. You do drabbles so well--they are a wonderful vehicle for your careful word choices, the craftsmanship that makes your artistry even more perfect.
And this last one just makes me sigh. I can see Mick's frozen soul (and body) uncurling in the warmth of Beth. Like a leaf in springtime.
I love the sense drabbles. I know I commented on them somewhere else, but not here. You do drabbles so well--they are a wonderful vehicle for your careful word choices, the craftsmanship that makes your artistry even more perfect.
And this last one just makes me sigh. I can see Mick's frozen soul (and body) uncurling in the warmth of Beth. Like a leaf in springtime.
She thaws a trail across me
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Re: Sense (7 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/14
Your post made me sniffle Allegrita, and "Touch" was exactly how I picture Mick's reaction to his first time with Beth. Beautiful Red.
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Thanks, alle and aolver.
A leaf in springtime.
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A leaf in springtime.
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Re: Sense (7 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/14
So very sensual. Mick has been subjected to so much sensual overload, yet with Beth everything is fresh and new. I love it.
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Re: Sense (7 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/14
Red, you posted a new one!
I do love the Sense drabbles so very much.
I'm reading while at work which is something I haven't done in ages but I couldn't resist here.
I do love the Sense drabbles so very much.
I'm reading while at work which is something I haven't done in ages but I couldn't resist here.
That line is just so incredibly perfect, Red. It makes me smile in the biggest way............I pull her tight, precious heat spreading, my chill escaping in a shiver as I uncurl in her touch. She holds me and in her arms, I am alive.
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Re: Sense (7 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/14
francis, coco, thank you both.
Delighted this made you smile, coco.
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Delighted this made you smile, coco.
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Re: Sense (7 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/14
red,
That last one, Touch, made me miss the show in a visceral way like a punch in the gut. That's how your work sometimes affects me. That's why I sometimes don't read your new stuff soon after it's posted. It hurts too much. It's that good.
It's like I'm grieving all over again. That probably sounds ridiculous, but do you know what I mean?
That last one, Touch, made me miss the show in a visceral way like a punch in the gut. That's how your work sometimes affects me. That's why I sometimes don't read your new stuff soon after it's posted. It hurts too much. It's that good.
It's like I'm grieving all over again. That probably sounds ridiculous, but do you know what I mean?
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Re: Sense (7 drabbles, PG-13) - updated 9/14
What a beautiful, loving and sensual drabble!! Your writing always leaves me in awe!! I love it!!!!
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