Moonlightaholics

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Didn't plan to do this but everyone was just so nice,

Here are seven more lines:

There’s beauty in that shadowed, shaded trail

Where sharpened sight cannot make all things clear

Missing notes don’t make the music fail

(Have you heard a distant bell or mournful dove?)

That said, the symphony of all you are—

The thundering of your heart and surging of the blood within your veins

Engulfs me like a flood of joy and hope when I think of all the beauty that remains.

Lovely!

Thank you, Alle.

Couldn't leave Mick (or whoever) in that nostalgic, sad place.

the symphony of all you are

What a wonderful description of Beth!

Thank you, MLC

Yes, to Mick she's a symphony he can dance to.

Oh this is gorgeous! I really love how you write!

And I love it ends on a hopeful note, too...

Diane

Thank you so much for the kind words!! In the first seven lines, there was a lot of sadness at what had been lost. This ends on a happier, hopeful note



Jenna

Lovely, lovely poem, Jenna

Thank you, Karen!!

Your kind words mean a lot!

Jenna