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Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 11:08 pm
by redwinter101
And this :heart: is for you, dear Jo. Thanks so much - I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.

And that's an interesting thought for another one. Mmmmm must think on that.

Red :rose:

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 11:55 pm
by jen
Wow.

Forget the tissues, I need a towel.

You are amazingly talented. That was absolutely lovely!

Thank you.

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 12:09 am
by redwinter101
Thank you, jen, for the read and the lovely comment. :rose:

Red

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 12:29 am
by Luxe de Luxe
simply stunned by this. the early line about vulnerability being private really got me in.. and that was just the beginning of the raw emotional honesty of this piece.

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:46 pm
by redwinter101
Many thanks, Luxe. That's just lovely. :rose:

Red

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 6:04 pm
by Kelly
:hankie: That was wonderful, Red...just wonderful :hankie:

I haven't been this affected by a story in a long time. :hankie: Well done!

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:16 am
by redwinter101
Kelly wrote::hankie: That was wonderful, Red...just wonderful :hankie:

I haven't been this affected by a story in a long time. :hankie: Well done!
Thanks, Kelly.

*offers Kel a hankie*

Red

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 12:14 am
by greenleaf9
red,

right now, the only thing my stunned and blown mind can think to comment on is the decency of the cemetary caretaker. What an inherently decent thing to do, to let Mick stay, and to refuse Josef's money.

I'll be back with a longer comment later. Once I can actually process this amazing story.

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 10:30 pm
by redwinter101
Thanks, gl9, the caretaker was a little ray of decency amid the gloom.

Red

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 6:22 pm
by Albra
I'm speechless ... I'm touched... I'm weeping ...
And first of all - I'm pondering ...
This last thing - your talent to force readers to pondering - makes your writing such good ...
:thanks:

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 8:02 pm
by redwinter101
Albra, I'm always so happy to see a comment from you, and I love that you were touched and that this piece made you ponder. Thank you. :rose:

Red

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:30 pm
by Albra
I knew how it will end for me :hankie:
but I'm back - with big box of tissues.
One more time - Thank you
:rose:

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:30 am
by redwinter101
:comfort: and :hearts:

Thanks, Albra. :rose: A re-read is so very precious.

Red

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:29 pm
by AussieJo
Just reread it.... Red! :snicker:

Still beautifully written, desperately sad, :hankie: but showing so much love. :comfort:
:hug:

Re: The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:14 pm
by redwinter101
:cloud9:

Re-reads are SO lovely. Thanks, AussieJo.

Red