Re: Insomnia (dsr) (PG) Challenge 127 3/28/11
Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 3:05 am
Thanks, EmEmerald wrote:How on earth did I miss this little gem, I really need to get out more.I love the way you crafted this story, the image of Josh being gripped by jealously, feeling alone even with Beth beside him, and blaming it on the bourbon, but deep down there's that part of him that 'knows' (and it knows a lot more than he can perhaps admit even to himself). Brilliant, wonderful, and very well written.
Josh just couldn't understand (or maybe he was in denial) why Beth would prefer Mick over him. What his conscious mind rejected, though, his subconscious mind confronted him with the truth....too bad dreams fade so quickly or he'd have put the pieces together.