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Re: Afterglow, part five (M/B/J, PG-13)

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 11:02 pm
by redwinter101
But parting is such sweet sorrow.

Thanks, my friend.

Red :rose:

Re: Afterglow, part five (M/B/J, PG-13)

Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 11:35 pm
by jen
Now I need to just grow up. All this leaking and sniffing doesn't accomplish anything except exascerbate my allergies.

Beautiful. :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs:

Re: Afterglow, part five (M/B/J, PG-13)

Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:42 am
by redwinter101
*hands jen a hankie*

I do love a tear-jerker and I really went for the heartstrings with this chapter.

Red

Re: Afterglow, part five (M/B/J, PG-13)

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 3:09 am
by Shadow
Oh but I love Mick's box of memories, and him showing those to Beth.
Wonderful romance, which makes it even more powerful when time starts to run out. With Beth, I could just feel that sick lurch as she realized their time was almost up.
Love how Josef is taken aback by how much he's going to miss Beth, and by the promises he's made her.

Re: Afterglow, part five (M/B/J, PG-13)

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 9:50 pm
by redwinter101
Thanks, Shadow. I always intended for this to be a sentimental story - so I'm delighted you felt the romance!

Red

Re: Afterglow, part five (M/B/J, PG-13)

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:59 am
by maggatha3
Chapter after chapter I feel that I can take no more..no more crying or heartbreaking. But look at me ,still going strong..

They found a way :hankie: - how did they ?- to share all that romance and love and essence in such little time! Mick's box of memories was like a hammer that broke down all my weak defences :hankie: :hankie: :hankie:

And now they are apart..and Josef has to be there for them both, and fix it all! My bet is on him, but still..so much pain. For a sentimental story, it is really, very powerful!