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Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:08 am
by Emma-lee
So sweet and innocent. I loved this.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:23 am
by wpgrace
Well damn, Red!

I've been so excited about and for Alex all day... and now you've done and gone made me yearn for Mick again! And you KNOW I love the backstory pieces... Oh :beep: ! And :happysigh:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:47 am
by janicevictoria
Red, Gorgeously written as usual and I loved the peek into Mick's pre-vampire life. Sweet and poignant :hearts:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:50 am
by starbucksjunkie
Did you write this in two hours? :worship: :worship:

Unbelievable.

So rich in detail, wistful, beautiful.

I love you, red. :heart: :heart:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 3:03 am
by wollstonecraft61
Oh, Red, there you go again with that gift of language you have! I love that this gift predated Mick's vamp days. What with the fascination with the vampire, we don't dwell enough on the man! This piece was piercing, but in a pleasurable way!!! :hug: :rose:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 3:29 am
by MSJ_sunglasses
Red, your first three sentences had me thinking it was a Mick becoming human again story, but then it changed into a beautiful, very poignant war time piece. I'm sure that many unexpected gifts just like the little girl's were handed over during that era.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 4:23 am
by eris
Wow... just wow... There are real stories like this, simple kindness and humanity in the midst of war, and this captures the essence of them beautifully. :heart:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 5:59 am
by MoonlitRose
Red,

What a beautiful glimpse of the other side of war. Those little acts of kindness that were so precious to the giver and the recipient. :hug: :comfort: :rose:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 8:08 am
by francis
Wonderful, redwinter. I like the contrast of the frozen soldier thawing to life by warmth, memories, and then the kindness of a little girl providing food. The short panic where they acted as soldiers again just shows how different a soldier is from another human being, in survival mode they run on instinct. I love young Mick stories of before he was a vampire. Maybe being a vampire wasn't so foreign to him, he has been a soldier, and it has certain similarities.
That you wrote this in such a short time is another thing to marvel. Well done!

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 11:59 am
by redwinter101
MLC, you should know by now to have the tissues handy. :hug:

Emma-lee, thanks! Delighted you enjoyed it.

Grace, ah, honey, you know me. I'm all about Mick.

jv, :smooch: thank you.

sbj, yep, two hours. Now I wonder why it takes me weeks with other stuff :grumble: . But I do enjoy writing to a prompt. Love you, too :smooch: .

Woll, thank you, as always, my friend.

MSJ_s, I'm sure you're right. Innocence and kindness in the midst of brutality - a recurring theme for Mick, I think.

eris, :blushing: thank you (and I'm sorry, again).

MoonlitRose, oh yes - so precious. A little touch of humanity to keep out the cold.

francis, you may well be right. Mick has always known how to survive, whatever the nature of the war.

Red

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 4:51 pm
by greenleaf9
Beautiful red

No one died, and no heartbreak, but my eyes welled with tears just the same. :hankie:

This is so heartwarming. :hug:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 5:07 pm
by mitzie
I found this to be a very uplifting story!! :hankie: A very powerful gift given the time and place and what they were going through in war. Beautifully written!! :heart: :yahoo: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :gasp: :eyes: :juggle: :bulb: :cloud9: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: :notworthy: :rose:

mitzie

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 5:14 pm
by fairytoes
What a perfect Story! I really enjoyed reading it, and yes, I had tears in my eyes as well! :hankie: :hankie:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 6:08 pm
by coco
Wonderful setting Red. Loved it. :thumbs:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 7:03 pm
by redwinter101
greenleaf9, mitzie, fairytoes, coco, thank you all so much. :rose:

Red