Mine (M/B, G-rated)

[redwinter101]

Thanks, pinkiepie (for the comment and for inspiring coco's lovely vid).

Red

[Penina Spinka]

That was beautiful. I wondered when he died for her, but he did, when he gave up being human to save her. I don't have that gift to put so much into so few words, but you do. Thanks.
Penina

[starbucksjunkie]

Thank you for this, red.

His limbs curled around me, a silver stare; possession, passion, desire flowing between us. My love, my everything, my reason.

This is my favorite line--the opening. Desire flowing between us. Beautiful.

And now I'm off to see the vid.

[janicevictoria]

Red, Another jaw droppingly brilliant fic. I loved the fact that it was Beth who was stating that Mick was "mine"; it's usually Mick that uses that term for her, so it was great to see she feels just as possessive of him.

Our future. I don't know what that means any more. I don't care. It will be. We will be.

Loved this line, it shows that Beth realizes that she will do whatever it takes to be with Mick through eternity.....sighs to self.....just blissful, Red!

[GuardianAngel]

Brave, bright, beautiful, always a little sad, even in joy.

How perfectly Mick.

Mine. The word never made me shiver quite like it does now.

Couldn't help it, at the end I wanted to negate her. Just like a two year old I wanted to yell "No! Mine!" Yeah *snicker* Dont' I wish.

Absolutely beautific, Red. Absolutely.

[redwinter101]

Penina - thank you. Yes that was precisely what I meant about Mick dying for her. I'm delighted you enjoyed this.

sbj, thank you and I hope you enjoyed the lovely vid.
jv, sometimes, just sometimes, I manage something that won't break your heart. Thank you, as always, for stopping by to read and comment.

GA,

How perfectly Mick.

The most perfect compliment. Thank you, sweetie.

Red

[Albra]

I haven't proper words ...

[redwinter101]

I haven't proper words ...

That's just lovely, Albra. The words and the smileys.



Red

[one.zebra]

We ARE Beth....

[redwinter101]

We ARE Beth....

Does that mean I have to share?

Red

[janicevictoria]

jv, sometimes, just sometimes, I manage something that won't break your heart. Thank you, as always, for stopping by to read and comment.

But sometimes that's a good thing, you know, like the way watching 'Wuthering Heights' makes you feel...sad but good

[redwinter101]

And another for jv.

Red

[jen]

Lovely, just lovely.

My MickBeth heart is happy.

Thank you, Red!

[tucutecats]

Oh how i wish I had a vampire of my very own. Red you are without a doubt one of the finest writers we have, the moment I see you name I'm on it. Thank you,thankyou.

[redwinter101]

jen, tucutecats, thank you both so much. I wish for a vampire all my own too.

Red