An Unexpected Gift - PG-13

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I can't count the number of times I've read this beautiful little vignette, and it still puts a big lump in my throat every time. :rose:

Many of us have commented on your amazing last line. It is so full of wonderfulness, and I'm really glad that Beth says what she says to Mick. But today, the part that just got to me was the fact that she shuddered... ohhhhh, that was so evocative. Who among us wouldn't shudder in total bliss at that exact moment? :melts: :melts: :melts: :melts: :melts:
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when you want to feel warm all over.....read this, prn.
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PNWgal, I really feel if Moonlight were a book, this could very well be written on its back cover...
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Alle, thank you SO much. :hug: LOL - I think we allllll would be shuddering in bliss with Mick. :melts:

Lucy... :laugh: Thank you. :hearts:

maggatha, that was SUCH a lovely compliment. Thank you! :heart:
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***doing a happy dance*** :hyper2: So glad to see this one again. I still love it so much!
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Since it is your birthday today, PNWgal, I was looking through your gifts to us....and that is one I will always love...among others of course! So, Happy Bday again and thanks for the gift.. :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Oh sweet vignette ! This is just beautiful, Mick and Beth loving and relaxed are always my favs.
I felt that " soft kisses " on my collarbone too, while reading this. :melts:
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Oh maggatha....that is so VERY sweet of you! :hug: Thank you so much...I always love to see this one drift to the top. :hearts:

I love a happy and relaxed Mick and Beth, too, loveyoumick - thank you! :smooch:
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Just "reopening" this wonderful gift on your birthday, Pgal... thank you for giving us your talent! What better way to celebrate your birthday? :smooch:
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Alle.... :hug: Thank YOU for giving this another read. :smooch:
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On another website some of us agreed that one of the saddest things about Sonata was that Beth never responded when Mick said he loved her. Then I come here and find this lovely story of yours. Thanks so much for this; it really sums up what we would have loved to have heard between Mick and Beth. Just loved it! Happy birthday and thank you for this lovely gift. :cheer: :cheer:
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While revisiting old challenges I had to pop up this little gem. All Mick Beth in a so few words. :heart:
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Carol... :hug:

Thank you, sweetie. :hearts:
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I think I've officially become a stalker of this story. :blushing:

This time, the thing that struck me most was the fact that Mick was so distracted by Beth's breast that he had to ask her to repeat herself. :hearts:

I mean... could there BE a more perfect man?!? :happysigh: :happysigh: No. There couldn't. :melts: :melts: :melts:
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there is just something so true to life about this -- and very moving too. that last line is a killer.
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