Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby Fleur de Lisa » Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:42 am

Oh Jen,you are too sweet, but superb? Uh uh. There are writers here that blow me away with their amazing talent. I swam in their wake with this one, but I am so very glad that you liked it. That means the world to me :hearts:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby Lucy » Thu Sep 15, 2011 3:24 am

If only we could experience that reality....but the description is one I can carry in my heart!!!! :rose:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby Fleur de Lisa » Thu Sep 15, 2011 1:43 pm

Lucy--- :cloud9:

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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby jen » Fri Sep 16, 2011 3:08 am

Fleur

Beg to differ, Sweetie, but I think you DO deserve that 'superb' and I'm not the only one.

I totally agree that we have writers around here who routinely blow me away with their talent. They effortlessly produce fabulous stories with intricate, wonderful plots, excel at putting our favorite characters in intriguing situations and achieve an emotional honesty and depth that I aim at and never manage to achieve, but this is really, really good.
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby Luxe de Luxe » Sat Sep 17, 2011 8:47 am

this was amazing, fleur! you really had me.... I was there, I could feel what she was feeling. wonderful. :cheer: :cheer:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby maggatha3 » Sat Sep 17, 2011 8:50 am

I came back for a re-read, it is my story after all, I can come and go as I please, right?? :snicker: Fleur, it is a wonderful story, so passionate and yet so very real. I love it!! :smooch:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby Fleur de Lisa » Sat Sep 17, 2011 2:16 pm

Jen--you left me speechless, which is a rare thing, indeed!

Luxe--you could feel what she was feeling?!?! Wow. That's pretty intense, luxe :giggle:

Maggatha--Yep. The door is always open! Thanks again!
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby HotMicks » Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:39 pm

:thud:

From funny to hot, you're my kinda gal, Fleur. :thumbs:

Except that, because I read the other one first, I was expecting another twist at the end. :snicker: Like it wasn't gonna be Mick or something. :gasp: Thankfully, it was straight-on HOT. :thud:

Fleur de Lisa wrote: ... the fact that I cannot breathe while looking at him looking at me.


Loved this line, because that's exactly how I felt when I met Alex. (And apparently I cannot speak in his presence, either, despite being given ample opportunity. At least not anything coherent. :snicker: )

And thanks for reminding me that I have to put all the "official" stuff at the beginning when I post the challenge piece. I'm such an amateur. :laugh: Just my luck I'd end up getting sued by CBS for copyright infringement. Now wouldn't that be rich with irony. :roll:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby PNWgal » Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:53 pm

I hope, somewhere along the line, I gave this the kudos it deserves.

If not, then shame, shame, SHAME on me. :blushing:

This is just a delicious description of quite possibly the most beautiful vampire ever, and fit what I would think Beth's thoughts would be should she ever get Mick naked for the first time. Or the second. Or hell, the millionth. :teeth:

And you say you're not a writer. :smooch:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby Fleur de Lisa » Sun Jan 01, 2012 9:09 pm

HM and PGal--I pretty much placed my thoughts in Beth's head during this. I imagine any woman with a pulse (& quite a few without) would be so overcome just from the sheer thought alone of Mick being naked and in one's presence. Add kissing, touching and lovemaking to the mix? Well, it's amazing that any heart could stand it. And he adores her. Honestly, I don't know how the girl didn't just pass out!!

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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby maggatha3 » Sat Mar 03, 2012 9:19 pm

I love this story for lots of reasons, but mostly for the...obvious one :heart: ! Thank you,Fleur! Mick's description through Beth's eyes , or any woman's I guess, is just terrific! :clapping:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby Fleur de Lisa » Sat Mar 03, 2012 9:38 pm

maggatha3 wrote:I love this story for lots of reasons, but mostly for the...obvious one :heart: ! Thank you,Fleur! Mick's description through Beth's eyes , or any woman's I guess, is just terrific! :clapping:


Could I adore you any more than I already do? I don't think so! :hearts:
So glad you popped in to re-read your story :smooch:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby jen » Sun Mar 04, 2012 1:45 am

Just read this again, and Mick may need to just open a vein right now and feed her his blood, because I don't know if she is going to make it through this.

But what a way to go!!!!

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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby Marigold » Sun Mar 04, 2012 5:48 am

Fleur: This was fantastic! :rose: :thud: :hearts: You did a wonderful job with the narration. :notworthy:

Thank you! :hug:
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Re: Reality outweighs fantasy (PG-13, Mick-Beth)

Postby allegrita » Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:04 am

Ah ma petite Fleur, your writing is so powerful... I forgot to breathe as I was reading this. :melts: :melts: :melts: :melts: :melts: :melts: :melts: :melts: :happysigh: :smooch:
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