Frozen Dreams (7 more lines) PG

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Frozen Dreams (7 more lines) PG

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Didn't plan to do this but everyone was just so nice,

Here are seven more lines:

There’s beauty in that shadowed, shaded trail

Where sharpened sight cannot make all things clear

Missing notes don’t make the music fail

(Have you heard a distant bell or mournful dove?)

That said, the symphony of all you are—

The thundering of your heart and surging of the blood within your veins

Engulfs me like a flood of joy and hope when I think of all the beauty that remains.
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Lovely! :hearts:
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Thank you, Alle.

Couldn't leave Mick (or whoever) in that nostalgic, sad place.
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the symphony of all you are
What a wonderful description of Beth! :heart:
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Thank you, MLC

Yes, to Mick she's a symphony he can dance to. :laugh:
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Oh this is gorgeous! I really love how you write! :heart:

And I love it ends on a hopeful note, too... :cloud9:
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Diane

Thank you so much for the kind words!! In the first seven lines, there was a lot of sadness at what had been lost. This ends on a happier, hopeful note

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Lovely, lovely poem, Jenna :rose:
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Thank you, Karen!!

Your kind words mean a lot!

Jenna

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