Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

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Re: Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

Postby nutmegger911 » Tue Mar 08, 2011 4:21 pm

Francis, I like this. Mick's confusion is just wonderful - bouncing between lover, mother, monster and child. You captured his fear at sleeping in a freezer for the first time so well. Kudos. :thumbs:
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Re: Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

Postby francis » Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:51 pm

Thank you, nm. I'm late with my thanks, but it means a lot. I can just try to imagine what it would be like to sleep in a freezer. Claustrophoby, here I come. :hug:
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Re: Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

Postby BlueEyedMonster » Mon Oct 22, 2012 6:16 am

Great story and nice use of the subject.

The short clip we see of Mick and his first "victim" was a very emotional scene and you have given it so much more depth.
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Re: Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

Postby francis » Mon Oct 22, 2012 6:25 am

Thanks for reading, BEM. I'm glad you liked this and the other stories too. :smooch:
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Re: Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

Postby cassysj » Wed Nov 14, 2012 4:15 am

Poor Mick, the transition if very hard for him. He wants to hold on to his humanity but there are some things that a fledgling needs whether they want them or not.
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Re: Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

Postby francis » Wed Nov 14, 2012 11:11 am

:hankie: You're so right. :hug:
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Re: Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

Postby francis » Mon Jul 01, 2013 12:08 pm

Giving this one a little bump. :howdy:
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Re: Cold as Ice (PG-13) challenge #124

Postby allegrita » Mon Jul 01, 2013 6:44 pm

The thing I love most about this story is that Mick is so bewildered by what has happened to him, and yet somehow very aware of what it's going to mean. He thinks like the man he always was, but his new body knows what it wants and what it needs.... and it's just dragging him along with it, whether he wants to go or not. His thoughts are so tormented, and of course he can't communicate any of his confusion or horror to Coraline. He never was very good at talking about the important stuff, was he? And of course, she wouldn't have any understanding of his mortal scruples anyway. She'd just tell him to let all that go, he didn't need it anymore.

Sigh... poor Mick. :Mickangel:
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