Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby AussieJo » Sat May 30, 2009 9:48 am

Excellent girls! :rose: :rose: A totally great story!!
Yeah, that '70's Mick story sounds good.
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby wpgrace » Sat May 30, 2009 11:39 am

Ahhhh! That was good!

No WONDER he loves Mick so much... and no wonder it was "unnatural" to him when Mick was human... :heart:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby greenleaf9 » Sat May 30, 2009 3:49 pm

What a fantastic backstory!! :clapping: :clapping: :clapping:

You ladies did an excellent job with this one! G was such a great character on the show--I can totally see this as his backstory to how he became a vampire! :vampire:

Bravo! :groupwave:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby Lilly » Sat May 30, 2009 4:07 pm

francis wrote:And I definitely think we should hear the story how Mick got that job at the Cleaner's. Kylara? Are you up for it?

Yes, please!! Kylara - say yes!! :pray:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby Phoenix » Sat May 30, 2009 5:36 pm

Francis & Kylara, that was fantastic. Thanks, ladies. :clapping:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby Kylara » Sat May 30, 2009 5:44 pm

Wow, I really didn`t think our story would impress so many people :o And they`re even asking for more !!!
So, my answer to francis (and Lilly) is: YES !!

(Actually "Mick-as-a-cleaner" was one idea among the others I sent to francis, but we both decided to work on the guillermo story...)
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby fairytoes » Sat May 30, 2009 6:02 pm

Francis and Kylara , what a great answer to the challenge!! The story how G became a vamp, brilliant! And yes, I would be interested how Mick got the cleaner's job as well - please???
Well done ladies!!!!! :hug: :hug:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby Emma-lee » Sun May 31, 2009 2:32 am

This was an AWESOME story. Guillermo is one of my favorite characters on the show. This just so fits in with the show. it is perfect.. Thanks for writing. You two are a good team.
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby darkstarrising » Sun May 31, 2009 3:17 am

francis and kylara - what a tremendous story!! In particular, the layering of Guillermo's was very well done indeed. His hopes of being a doctor, the discrimination he faces being Hispanic, the emotion he feels as he identifies the body of his friend. You wove in some nice historical bits and pieces pertinent to the times as well such as being a medic in Viet Nam. This was an incredible answer to the challenge. :rose:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby francis » Sun May 31, 2009 8:17 am

Thank you! Guillermo was in Vietnam as a medic, so he should have a lot to talk about with Mick.

Just want to tell everybody that Kylara and myself are working on that Mick story... :wave:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby wollstonecraft61 » Sun Jun 07, 2009 8:47 pm

This story of Guillermo's turning has to be one of the best I have read. This would have made a great episode on t.v. :clapping: :clapping: :clapping:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby francis » Sun Jun 07, 2009 8:53 pm

Oh, woll, you are too kind. It's probably the best because I don't remember any other stories of G's turning.
Thank you so much!
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby PNWgal » Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:00 pm

I'm a bit behind in my Challenges reading, so my apologies for responding so slowly.

francis, kylara, this was WONDERFUL. I loved the backstory into Guillermo and really enjoyed the air of suspense around his cousin Raul's death. I especially enjoyed you two making Mick a Cleaner and look forward to whatever you guys come up with!

Wonderful job, ladies!
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby francis » Fri Jun 12, 2009 9:47 pm

Thank you, PNWgal! :hyper:
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)

Postby nutmegger911 » Sun Jul 05, 2009 3:51 pm

Francis, Kylara, nice story for the challenge. You tie so many bits of Moonlight into the story. Also, I like the way you've captured the social dynamic of the 70's. (Oh, and you may have guessed I like Guillermo. :snicker: )
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