Josef versus Beth (rated G)

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jen wrote:Beth and Josef do have a similar streak in them, so conflict is kinda unavoidable.

Mick should just keep his pretty head down.

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MickLifeCrisis wrote:I really enjoyed this! I could just picture Beth in the beginning, casually looking at her nails while Mick is surveying the battle ground that used to be their apartment! And then the ending, where Josef launches himself at Beth... loved it! :clapping:
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Re: Josef versus Beth (rated G)

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Oh my goodness, Crazy Fluffy, this is just as your name suggests -- crazy!! Josef versus Beth, indeed. I'm not a betting woman myself, but I gotta put my money on Beth for this one. Hysterical. Thanks!

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Re: Josef versus Beth (rated G)

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He may need to raid that locker where he kept his gear from WW2. A combat helmet may come in handy right about now.

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A fab take on the first line. :clapping:
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Re: Josef versus Beth (rated G)

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There hasn't been a Mickbeth story that made me laugh like this one did. :rolling: :rolling: Beth throwing Josef out the window is way tooo funny. And now hubby will get to see bff take his revenge. :rolling: Who wins? :giggle:

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I'm revisiting old challenges. This one always makes me smile. Josef is definitely not done fighting the bell has rung on the first round but it's who is standing at the end that counts.
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Re: Josef versus Beth (rated G)

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In the first place, the venue isn't appropriate.

No criticism of you, CrazyFluffy, this is great, but both Beth and Josef should know that having this...challenge in this particular location is unwise. Do you think Josef would have agreed to it at his residence?

Too many very expensive breakables.

There is also the question of the Tribe's low profile to consider. Massive breakage could be tough to explain.

A good lesson for Beth (location, location, location and pick whose stuff is going to get trashed next time) and perhaps for Josef, too, but I don't expect Josef to admit it. At least not right away.

Great job!!!

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