A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)

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A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)

Postby diane31 » Wed Oct 01, 2014 6:31 am

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The plot is the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Note: This is from Mick's POV, and I'm sure you already guessed the scene from the title. :winky:
Lots of thanks to Allegrita for giving me the feedback I so needed! :rose:

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A thing for vampires

"Obviously she had a thing for vampires."

"Yeah, I guess they're back in style."

Well, technically, YOU brought them back in style...

When you saw the bite marks on the dead girl's neck... from 30 yards away, I felt awe just shooting through you.

And hope shooting through me...
"You know, some people actually find them attractive."

"Really?!?!?"

Crap; that felt more like getting shot.




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edited to fix typo.
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Re: A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)

Postby allegrita » Wed Oct 01, 2014 7:03 am

Poor Mick. She really shot him down, didn't she?! :winky: (Sorry, I couldn't resist.) :snicker:

How so fun to "hear" Mick's thoughts between the lines of that encounter with Beth. (And Beth--how could you say "Really??!!" like that???? Silly woman! :mdrama: )
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Re: A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)

Postby MickLifeCrisis » Wed Oct 01, 2014 10:37 pm

Great between the lines. Mick sure did seem deflated when Beth said "Really?" :laugh:

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Re: A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)

Postby diane31 » Fri Oct 03, 2014 4:01 am

allegrita wrote: She really shot him down, didn't she?! (Sorry, I couldn't resist.)


:snicker: I don't blame you!

MickLifeCrisis wrote:Mick sure did seem deflated when Beth said "Really?"


Yes he did didn't he? From the mouths of babes... I really like that scene because it's got that fun Moonlight lightness to it, and at the same time it shows Mick's predicament so well. He just can't help hoping. :Mickangel:

Thank you for your kind comments! :hearts: :flowers:
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