The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby MoonShadow » Tue Aug 23, 2011 2:50 am

This is a perfect example of what I love about writing ML fic. There are so many opportunities to slip into the moments between.

My very first attempts at writing ML was to fill in those pesky commercial gaps. I love, love, love, what you've done here Lucky.
Filled in that pesky gap just before the camera rolled.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!

it appears that I have been reading to many children's books, Eloise at the Plaza in particular. :snicker:
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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby Lucy » Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:11 am

Oh, heck, yeah....that tweedy little guy DID hear her....

Great Prologue to the Show, I could "see" it happening!
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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby RangerCM » Wed Aug 31, 2011 5:41 pm

I absolutely love this. Has anyone tackled those last several hours before Beth and Mick first meet before? I'm not sure! If not, it's about time! :snicker:

This fits so perfectly with the tone of the show, that I can see it actually being written and shot for the first episode, but edited for time before the episode aired. Well, done, my dear. :notworthy: :notworthy:
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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby maggatha3 » Sat May 26, 2012 3:37 pm

Shame on me, I have read this so many times and never commented. I looove how you point out the details of their feelings and their relationship in this little rendez-vous!

Beth is ready to move on and be swept off her feet by a gorgeous, mysterious man..and oh my god, poor Josh..

But what a prologue to Moonlight!

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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby cassysj » Thu Sep 06, 2012 2:54 am

Visiting old challenges. Poor Josh unfortunately for him he was not her Guardian Angel. I do love this peek into Beth and Josh just before Mick
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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby Marigold » Fri Sep 07, 2012 2:03 am

Bravo, Lucky! :notworthy: :rose: I love everything you've done with the food -- Beth is spicy, while Josh is bland and predictable. The fortunes they received are perfect.

The inclusion of a certain pork bun-loving professor was a nice touch.

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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby allegrita » Fri Sep 07, 2012 2:26 am

I love this one! So nice to have it pop back up so I could reread it. Beth's on her way and Josh has a tummyache. Oh, deeear... that pretty much says it all right there. :eyeroll:
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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby librarian_7 » Fri Sep 07, 2012 2:29 am

Thanks for the lovely new comments! You know, reading this over again, and the comments as well, may have given me a little idea.... not making any wild promises, but hey, you never know.
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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby allegrita » Tue Mar 19, 2019 9:51 pm

Gosh, it's been a long time since I read this one! I love this little peek at Beth's and Josh's relationship before Mick entered the picture (well, at least overtly entered it... I love Beth's little prayer to her guardian angel... and it looks like her hand WAS guided to pick the appropriate fortune cookie!).
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Re: The Fortune Cookie -- PG-13 (Beth and Josh)

Postby MickLifeCrisis » Wed Mar 20, 2019 4:07 am

I could have sworn... I was so sure that I had never read this one before. And then, there's my comment. :blushing:

Glad you bumped this, Alle! It was like reading it for the first time. Beth needed something more that what Josh was offering - she just wasn't sure what, yet. She'll find out soon!
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