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What's in a Name? (G)

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Disclaimer: If you recognize it, then it's not mine.
Note: This is probably the shortest FF that I will probably ever write...it's only 34 words, but they were the toughest 4 words that I have ever written. Seems the fewer words you have, the pickier you have to be. :snicker:

Basically, the purpose of this FF is the explore Mick's quickness to judge himself when he sees Beth as someone who can do wrong. Beth's deal with Josef is a perfect example of how Mick can be blind when it comes to his Beth.


What’s in a Name?


What’s in a name?


Mick St. John—

…Vampire

……...Undead

………......Killer

…………......Beast

………………......Immortal.


…doff thy name…

I can’t.


Beth Turner…my Beth—

…Human

……...Delicate

………...Innocence

…………...Beauty

………………...Mortal.


What’s in a name?

In my case? Everything.
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Yeah... so true... and with "mortal". I think that's one of the keys... he truly loves her mortality. You're on fire, Kelly... :hearts:
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wpgrace wrote:Yeah... so true... and with "mortal". I think that's one of the keys... he truly loves her mortality. You're on fire, Kelly... :hearts:
Thanks, Grace :hug:

The irony of this one is that he keeps trying to find reasons why they shouldn't be together....reasons why they are just too different. However, the light he sees Beth in is faulty. They are nt as different as he believes.
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Super short, Kelly, but super powerful! :clapping:

Each word selected fits into place perfectly. And the 'mortal' especially. :yes:

Loved it! :hug:
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greenleaf9 wrote:Super short, Kelly, but super powerful! :clapping:

Each word selected fits into place perfectly. And the 'mortal' especially. :yes:

Loved it! :hug:
Thank you :rose: :hug:
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Every word set in place. A wonderful pattern, and it conveys so much truth about Mick and Beth. Brilliant. :smooch:
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