Eternity - PG-13

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Re: Eternity - PG-13

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Back for another reread and you have done such a fantastic job of capturing the raw power of this scene and taking it deeper.

The emotional thunderstorm of Josh's murder was still raging within them, and feelings long buried were ripped violently to the surface and used as weapons. I, too, was angry with Beth but I understood that in these times, we often say things that we don't mean and will later regret.

Stunning in its depth and power. You are such an artist with words.

Thank you!
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