Between Saturday and Sunday -- PG

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Re: Between Saturday and Sunday -- PG

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It's wonderful to see some of the older stories being rediscovered and to hear peoples thoughts on them now.
Thank you both for your wonderful feedback,
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Be bloody, bold, and resolute; laugh to scorn
The power of man, for none of woman born
Shall harm Macbeth.

Macbeth, 4. 1
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Re: Between Saturday and Sunday -- PG

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Loved this slice of Fever and the doubts, hopes, fears, longings of Josh and Beth. I can never get enough of these Moonlight pieces. :heart:
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Re: Between Saturday and Sunday -- PG

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Helloeeze, I apologize for not telling you thank you before this. I am thrilled that you enjoyed the story. I hope you find more in my library to read.
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Be bloody, bold, and resolute; laugh to scorn
The power of man, for none of woman born
Shall harm Macbeth.

Macbeth, 4. 1
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Re: Between Saturday and Sunday -- PG

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Moonshadow

This is fabulous!

In the early part of the fic, I wasn't sure where to place it, but later details placed in at the beginning of Fever.

I like Beth's internal turmoil about her attraction to Mick as she sees it as a betrayal of Josh, too. Yet she is totally powerless against the nearly magnetic attraction to the enigmatic P.I. Half forgotten memories, vampire allure, true love or a combination of all three, she had already past the event horizon and was falling into love with Mick.

It is entirely logical that Josh reads body language and both Beth and Mick gave away a lot of signals.

Wonderful, wonderful story.

Thank you!

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Mick and Beth--two of the lovely faces of Moonlight
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