An Unexpected Gift, rated G

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An Unexpected Gift, rated G

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Author's note: Written (but submitted too late, darn it!) for the MLA Two-Hour Challenge, April 30, 2009.

An Unexpected Gift

“Well, land sakes,” said Arlene, shutting the front door and walking into the kitchen where her husband was sitting at the table.

“What’s that, dear?” asked her husband absently. He had taken the toaster apart for the umpteenth time and he squinted as he stretched a tiny spring, trying to hook it into a tiny hole. The spring lost its anchor and snapped out of the needle-nose pliers, bouncing off the ceiling and disappearing onto the cracked linoleum floor.

“Oh, drat the thing,” said Arlene. “Mike, this registered package just arrived. Did you order something?” She placed a large, thick envelope on the far end of the kitchen table, carefully avoiding the toaster pieces strewn near her husband.

“No, I didn’t order anything. What is it?” Mike levered himself out of his chair and gingerly knelt on the floor, running his palm over the surface, searching for the missing spring.

Arlene hopped up and leaned over her husband. “Don’t you do that, honey, let me sweep. I’m sure I can find it with the broom.” She gently tugged on her husband’s shoulder and he looked up at her, craning his neck.

“Well, why didn’t you think of that before I was down here?” His eyebrows pulled together in a little frown, but she could hear the smile in his voice. Groaning a little, he let her help him to his feet and sat back down in the chair.

Arlene busied herself sweeping the floor carefully, making a little pile of crumbs and dust in the middle of the floor. She brushed the pile into a dustpan and sat down with it, picking through it. “Aha! Found it,” she crowed, setting the little spring down on the table.

“Woman, you’re good! Now let’s see if I can hang on better this time,” said Mike, grasping the tiny thing tightly in the pliers and carefully anchoring it again. Arlene held her breath while he struggled to hold his hand steady enough to fit the hook of the spring through the little hole. At last he connected it, and Arlene released her breath in a whoosh.

She sat back, fanning herself, and laughed. “I swear, you make everything an adventure.”

Mike looked up at her over the top of his glasses and raised a finely-drawn eyebrow. “Always have, always will. It’s a St. John specialty.” He winked at her and bent his head back to his work. “Almost done with the tricky part,” he said in a grunt, fitting two parts together and looking around for the screwdriver. “Here, can you put the screw through these two holes while I hold it?”

Arlene stood up and bent over Mike, picking up the little screw in her delicate fingers. She straightened her glasses on her nose and peered through them as she steadied his shaky hands with one of hers and threaded the screw through the holes with the other. “There.” She picked up the screwdriver and tightened the screw, then kissed her husband’s head and straightened up. His hair had once been black, but it was still thick and curly, and she loved to touch it.

“Now honey, you’re distracting me,” Mike grumbled, but he was smiling.

“Oh, don’t pretend you don’t love it,” Arlene said, laughing. Stroking her husband’s cheek briefly, she went back to her place and sat watching him, her chin on her hands. Suddenly her eyes fell on the envelope that had arrived earlier.

“Well, for heaven’s sakes, I’d forget my own head if it wasn’t tied on. Here’s this letter, and it’s addressed to you. Aren’t you going to open it?”

Mike glanced up. “Go ahead and open it for me, why don’t you? My hands are full.”

Arlene went over to the pencil cup, got the letter opener, and brought it back to the table. Sitting again, she slipped the blade inside the flap and slit the top of the envelope.

Inside were a letter in a sealed, business-sized envelope, a thick booklet, and another large, unsealed envelope. Arlene opened the smaller envelope and unfolded the letter inside. “It’s from a lawyer.” She scanned the letter and her eyes got very big.

“A lawyer? What does a lawyer want with us?” Mike glanced over at Arlene and saw her shocked face. “What is it, honey? What’s wrong?”

Arlene’s eyes were brimming. “Oh, Mike, look at this!” She held out the letter to him in a shaking hand, and her tears spilled over. She took a paper napkin out of the holder and held it to her eyes.

Mike took the letter and read it. “Dear Mr. St. John… trust… your son, Michael?” He looked up. “What is this? Arlene, what the hell is this about?” He slammed the letter down, knocking a piece of the toaster onto the floor. “Is this some kind of sick joke? What do they mean, a trust fund that Mick set up?”

Arlene mopped at her eyes and blew her nose on the napkin. “I… I don’t know, Mike. It looks like Mick set up some sort of trust when he got out of the service, and they just now found it. And—and—since he’s gone, it’s come to us.”

Mike put a clammy hand to his eyes. “It’s been so long… I never thought I’d hear his name again.” He could feel a lump growing in his throat, threatening to unman him. He coughed and cleared his throat to hide his emotion. “Well then, so what’s this nest egg our boy had? Hand it over.”

Arlene slid the large envelope over to him and looked at the booklet. “It’s some big company. I guess it’s stock or something,” she said. “Kostan Industries. There’s a company brochure and an annual report.”

Mike slid the colorful certificate out of the envelope and looked at it. “Kostan Industries, huh? That’s a Fortune 100 company. How could Mick—”

“Maybe it was some sort of repurchase plan. The dividends got reinvested. How many shares are there? Maybe we can sell ‘em and go to Hawaii.” Arlene was leafing through the colorful company brochure.

Mike looked at the certificate and his face paled. “Uh… Arlene?” He gulped.

“Yes, Mike? Is it bad news? It’s OK, we can take it.” Arlene stood up and stood by her husband’s chair, cradling his head against her breasts.

Mike rubbed his cheek against his wife’s body. “It’s OK, honey. But where’s today’s paper? Where’s the business section?”

“Here it is,” Arlene said, pulling the paper out of the trash basket. “The business section, you say?” She fished out the section he wanted and handed it to him.

Nervously, he turned pages till he found the stocks, and then ran his finger down the columns until he found the one he was looking for. He looked up at his wife, his mouth open.

“What is it, Mike?” Arlene put her hand on her heart.

“Honey…this stock is worth over two million dollars.” Mike lifted the certificate again to double-check his math.

Arlene reached for the back of her chair and then slowly sank down into the seat, her eyes never leaving her husband’s face. “Mike… it’s like a miracle.”

“It is a miracle,” he said soberly. “It’s like Mickey knew we’d be…” He choked. “It’s like he knew.”

Arlene held her hands out and Mike took them. “It’s like he’s been watching us from Heaven, isn’t it, dear?”

“Yeah,” Mike said, and a tear rolled down his weathered cheek.

Arlene squeezed his fingers and then sat up straight, all business. “Well, come on, then. We’ve got to get to the bank before it closes!”
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Alle, Alle, this is so sweet.

I love it! And what's a few minutes between friends, hmm?

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This is so sweet. And I really like the picture of Mr. St. John fixing the toaster. Something tells me he'll be doing the same thing even after the money comes.....it's just a generational thing. Ya just don't throw good stuff away if it can be fixed! :snicker:
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Okay. I'm a sap. This made me cry.

I loved that Mick made sure they had the money - and I adored the picture of them you painted - but it just made me weep for the family Mick lost and the son they lost. :hankie:

*sniffles off to compose myself*

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Oh God alle---this is a perfect example of why I love you. What an intriguing, wonderful, perfectly sweet idea. You had me with the first line: "Land Sakes"--setting the tone beautifully.

So, so, so, sweet----and such a Mick thing to do.

Now they can go and buy a damn toaster!!!!
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Allegrita,

Such a different angle. Yet so in keeping with everything. Mick's still there in the back ground, watching over them.

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This is beautiful! And such a sweet look at Mick's parents. I hope they have a ball in Hawaii!
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*snags a tissue from Red*

Awww geez, Alle...this was just so sweet. Fixing the toaster is something my dad would do - why buy new if he can just jury-rig something together?

And I'm with Red here - Mick makes sure his folks are taken care of because he can't be there for them is so bittersweet.

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This is such a sweet story. I love the picture you painted of Mick's parent, may they have a glorious golden age.
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So lovely, Allegrita! I can see Mick doing something like this so easily- and his parents are SO in character for those of their generation as well. Excellent!
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I'm with the other blubberers. I'm mopping my eyes between tapping keys. This sounds like something Mick would do. He'd want to take care of his parents even if he couldn't be with them.

Also loved your take on the senior Mike. He sounds like he's still got that St. John charm and it has nothing to do with being a vampire.
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Late, schmate....that doesn't make it any less wonderful...I love this premise that Mick may have had to give up his family but he didn't abandon them. Poignant, and perfect, and exactly what he would have done.
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What can I say that hasn't already been said!! This is just so sweet! Just loved it! Thank You :heart:
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This was wonderful...grabs the community tissue and dabs at her eyes. I love it.
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Lucky, thanks! This was a wonderful challenge, and I'm glad to have been part of it. It's amazing how many very different stories came from this simple idea.

RangerCM, I think so too... that's just the way people of that generation were. I channeled my grandparents for this story--they were born around the turn of the century. My dad is Mick's age. :)

red, thank you for letting me play--and for the idea-- and for crying. :hearts: Nyah, you owed me some tears, woman!!! :tongue: I agree--Mick's family lost so much when they lost him. And it was worse, because he made it home from the war, and then he just disappeared. What a horrible thing to have happen--for a child to simply disappear. I feel so desperately sorry for his parents. :comfort: :bmoon: :Mickangel:

Lisa, thanks so much--I love you too. :hearts: And yeah--that's exactly what Mick wants for them. Never to be in need. He can't fix what was broken, like his dad does--but he can try to cushion them from the worst life can throw at them. :hankie: I figure if he watched over Beth all those years, he must've watched over his folks, too. It's the kind of thing he'd do.

JosefsRose, thank you! Yeah, I like to think that Mick is their guardian angel, too. :Mickangel:

AggieVamp, yeah, I see them in loud Hawaiian outfits, having fun, and raising a toast to Mick. Maybe going to see the USS Arizona Memorial in his honor... *sniffle*

PNWgal, thanks... I like tugging on your heartstrings. You tug on mine so successfully! I'm glad Mick's dad comes across as real to you. I can just see him--he has Mick's eyebrows and hair, but his face is longer and creased, and he doesn't have a dimple in his chin. He has the same smile, though... and the same long, lean body type. And Arlene is short and spunky and she has beautiful bone structure--and Mick has her changeable eyes and long, long lashes. :hearts:

cassysj, thank you--that is Mick's wish, too. :hug:

jenstc2003, thanks--I'm so glad you felt they were right for their age. I really have a very strong picture of them in my head, and I'd never even thought of them before this challenge.

GuardianAngel, thank you for crying. I hate to be happy that I made people cry, but this one was meant to be sentimental. Yeah, Mick's dad definitely has the St. John "it" factor. :thumbs:

Lunalux, thanks, my sister. Mick can't abandon his family. He loves them and watches over them and tries to make sure they'll be OK... even though he can't give them what they really want--their son back. :hankie:

kpyle, no need to say more! Thank you so much for reading and enjoying this. :hug:

Emma-lee, thank you! Have another tissue. :hug:
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